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The pacing was good, cadance actually being mature and level headed over it. Twilight going into panic mode as is expected.
Rainbow being an ass(is that racist?) and her and Shining armor just not bothering at all and going along with the nonsense the prissy ones get up to while doing their own thing.
Very nice. Good work once again
Nice to see Cadance more mature about dealing with Chrysalis.
Celestia kissing a changeling!!! 0_0 OMG!!!
Very fun. Both Celestia and Chrysalis panicking over Cadence's impending arrival was really cute to read.
Pacing wise, I would have liked to see Cadence's emotional transition drawn out a bit? But it's not a huge deal.
I also love the development in their relationship right at the end. It really felt earned, if that makes sense.
I would say more, but I'm afraid other commenters already got it covered.
I like this chapter, happy to see them getting things resolved.