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Well written but the tempo is off in this one . .
At the beginning she still loses control, in the middle throws one image away for another and at the end finally loves what lies beneath the deception?
And the speaker mentioning the Lunar War was completely uncalled for and her reaction afterwards was again way too badly timed going from angry to accepting in a moment.
Very nice, I look forward to next weeks chapter note so than usual
I'm really feeling the time skip on this one...