Part of the Family

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Bronycommander

Bronycommander #1 · Jul 7th, 2020 · · ·

Lovely! Though, I wonder, who's the father or did I overlook something?

Winter Quill

Winter Quill #2 · Jul 7th, 2020 · · ·

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Fancy Pants is the father, they used magic to move the embryo once it was viable (this is actually something they do with RL horses).

Bronycommander

Bronycommander #3 · Jul 7th, 2020 · · ·

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I see. As I said, great work!

Me, pretty new to writing mature fics, but the ones who help me say I do actually pretty well

Viper Pit

Viper Pit #4 · Jul 7th, 2020 · · ·

This was suprisingly wholesome

Klamnei

Klamnei #5 · Jul 7th, 2020 · 1 · ·

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Emotion Nexus

Emotion Nexus #6 · Jul 7th, 2020 · 1 · ·

This is honestly adorable and leaves me craving more of both; this universe, and a more expansive version of this kind if narrative.

I still like this a lot, but Raven overall is such an underrated character, and it'd be nice to see her in a full length fic besides Crystal Wishes.

The characterizations of both Fleur and Raven are great, especially regarding Raven's mane and glasses. It sound like this is something that Raven desperately needed; a nice place to settle down after retirement, and a loving family to take care of.

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