You find yourself back in your homeland of Equestria, having been pulled away so many millennia ago. While your heart is telling you to reunite with your soulmate Celestia, could you live with yourself if you abandon planet Earth in its time of need?
I love this story. It's very well written and although it seems slightly rushed, I feel like that's more from the fast pace and less from actually being rushed per se. Either way I still need to keep reading, I love it so. And I love his nickname for Princess Celestia. Horse Lady
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I enjoy it very much! Keep up the good work
It's good to see the Slayer is still human underneath. It's something I'm trying to show with my story as well.
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It justs shows, that even though that a thousand something years has passed, he is still a human :)
I love this story. It's very well written and although it seems slightly rushed, I feel like that's more from the fast pace and less from actually being rushed per se. Either way I still need to keep reading, I love it so.
And I love his nickname for Princess Celestia. Horse Lady
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Thank you very much for the kind words and criticism!
Pacing is something I need to work on for sure. The later chapters have been especially rushed and future chapters will not feel like that.
The plan definitely is for the story to be fast paced to a degree. I'd like to keep the story below 150k words max.