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Really enjoying the story so far.
It's well done and the pacing so far is good and believable.
Really different setting compared to the usual HiE fics and the political intrigue and Spy Thriller Elements always bring me back looking for updates.
Keep going!
Мы так не говорим! "Иди нахуй!" - вот так надо!
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Pacing was something I struggled with the most while writing this. I was so concerned that the romance would appear rushed that I second guessed myself all the way up until putting this chapter out. But I felt it was time, we've seen snatches of the developing relationship between the two for a few chapters.
It just felt right and I'm glad I hit the mark. Thanks for the vote of confidence my friend. And rest assured that this story isn't finished by a long shot!
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I think the buildup was sufficient. My guess for the progress of the story would be, that it's somewhere around 30-35% finished, depending of the scope you are aiming for.
Don't feel like you have to write just to make the story longer, most times keeping it relatively short and sweet is better than dragging it out for too long.
His mind once she said this:
Ahh, sappy moments... Love em~
Oh shit he's going for it!
Gentlemen... we have lift off~