Damn, I was not expecting things to get this screwed up this fast. Not that they didn't deserve it, but, just wow, one hell of a spell. This continues to get more interesting, so you've got my support.
1705538 Well we had a good run, a regular maelstrom of clop for a bit there, but it fit the more manic pace I was setting. We'll see how things play out in the last chapter.
There's something I don't get. It seems like it wasn't the first time they took a pony to make it a slave, or I missed a part. And no one before ever tried to escape ? Why did Vinyl, a random pony with a not-so-good magic (she's not as good as Twilight), totally on drugs, managed to barely escape, and not the previous ones ? It looked like it was the first time they faced a pony who escaped.
I alluded to it a couple times, but Fancy Pants usually abducts foals, as it's much easier to train them into obedient minions. When he states they won't need anything else from Octavia to keep Vinyl drugged, he more or less is saying he either intended to kill Vinyl or break her mentally, whichever came first. So he abducts adults when it suits his needs, but they don't live long since they are liabilities. All the adults at his party, for instance, are all guests.
When she is in her drugged state, her emotions are extremely heightened and she has no real sense of restraint. Instead of bothering to focus, she just let it all out, like she had previously on Octavia. So you get these incredibly unpredictable, powerful results. Eventually this could be very dangerous for the user indeed.
1720881 Well, I know that Fancy Pants used to do this with foals, and for them it was quite normal they become minions. But the difference was that Vinyl is a mare, she was only in contact with Fancy Pants since a few days and it may have been risky from Fancy, she may not be so obedient. But yeah, considering that Vinyl is totally drugged, it can make sense that she casts a powerful spell and stuff. The only part I don't get is why he never encountered a stallion/mare like Vinyl before, totally drugged, we can see that he didn't seem to take any precautions.
Magnificent. I simply cannot think of any truly meaningful criticism I could give. The early chapters are a perfect mix of boneriffic and disturbing, and the most recent one...fucking hell.
Pushing through the pain, he craned his neck to survey the damage. All the skin below his chest was a mess of burned fur and melted tuxedo. His perfect tail was singed nearly completely off. He grit his teeth in anger as her realized he was in no shape to give chase, let alone stand.
Damn, I was not expecting things to get this screwed up this fast. Not that they didn't deserve it, but, just wow, one hell of a spell. This continues to get more interesting, so you've got my support.
Well fuck that went from dark to black as fuck.
I have to say things got out of control and unlike the previous chapters no " clopping" are you changing your style
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Well we had a good run, a regular maelstrom of clop for a bit there, but it fit the more manic pace I was setting. We'll see how things play out in the last chapter.
Holy shit that was dark and hard to read without getting creeped out. Good job!
There's something I don't get. It seems like it wasn't the first time they took a pony to make it a slave, or I missed a part.
And no one before ever tried to escape ? Why did Vinyl, a random pony with a not-so-good magic (she's not as good as Twilight), totally on drugs, managed to barely escape, and not the previous ones ?
It looked like it was the first time they faced a pony who escaped.
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I alluded to it a couple times, but Fancy Pants usually abducts foals, as it's much easier to train them into obedient minions. When he states they won't need anything else from Octavia to keep Vinyl drugged, he more or less is saying he either intended to kill Vinyl or break her mentally, whichever came first. So he abducts adults when it suits his needs, but they don't live long since they are liabilities. All the adults at his party, for instance, are all guests.
When she is in her drugged state, her emotions are extremely heightened and she has no real sense of restraint. Instead of bothering to focus, she just let it all out, like she had previously on Octavia. So you get these incredibly unpredictable, powerful results. Eventually this could be very dangerous for the user indeed.
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Well, I know that Fancy Pants used to do this with foals, and for them it was quite normal they become minions. But the difference was that Vinyl is a mare, she was only in contact with Fancy Pants since a few days and it may have been risky from Fancy, she may not be so obedient.
But yeah, considering that Vinyl is totally drugged, it can make sense that she casts a powerful spell and stuff.
The only part I don't get is why he never encountered a stallion/mare like Vinyl before, totally drugged, we can see that he didn't seem to take any precautions.
But thanks for the details.
This was amazing I can't wait to see what happens next. This finally got me to register , haha.
Magnificent. I simply cannot think of any truly meaningful criticism I could give. The early chapters are a perfect mix of boneriffic and disturbing, and the most recent one...fucking hell.
An this:
Made my day. Made my week.
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Dang, did I lose power here cuz this story just got dark as hell!!! I don't normally read dark stories, but this one is so exciting/messed up to read!
This is very, very good
Things escalated quickly! Wtf was all that? Octavia decided to sell her lovely little unicorn to death right after selling her for a contract?
Its official, the shit has indeed hit the fan.
>>Togashi
Small spelling error spotted:
Pushing through the pain, he craned his neck to survey the damage. All the skin below his chest was a mess of burned fur and melted tuxedo. His perfect tail was singed nearly completely off. He grit his teeth in anger as her realized he was in no shape to give chase, let alone stand.
Should be HE I believe.
Sorry for being so anal.
Clad in a fine silken tuxedo, his mane blue mane was carefully cut and styled,
his blue mane and not his mane blue mane, unless it's like James Bond. "Mane, Blue Mane." :P
My word...i am utterly hooked beyond all belief.