Gotten lots of smiles from this so far. Each plot thread is quite interesting, in terms of character and worldbuilding both. My guess as to the hell portal? After moving, it's leaking Lust instead of Pride. Soon we're gonna have girls hilting themselves on those stupid rooftop spikes.
Besides, if the fell energies become too much of a problem, Shining Armor can throw on a white suit and sunglasses, hop through the portal, and bring back some demon girls to help fix things. And possibly, if Cadance approves, form a harem on the side.
10324546 "Common misconception. Lasers are a grossly inefficient means of harming others when compared to firearms. Well, when magic isn't involved, anyway. And that's saying nothing of a man-portable nuclear reactor—" "Twilight." "Oh! Right! Most importantly, I'd never do that kind of thing, even at my worst. Sorry, Sunset, I was distracted by the lasers."
Soon we're gonna have girls hilting themselves on those stupid rooftop spikes.
Uh... Looking at the building, they'd have quite a few logistical issues to tackle. This is a gate to Hell, not the Plane of Pink Energy. (Too much of which is dangerous.)
10324771 Obvious, yes. There's just one catch: How do you do that?
10324978 Nothing concrete in terms of scheduling, I'm afraid. They'll be ready when they're ready.
Sugarcoat: "That was a 7/10 wank. You should consider never doing that ever again, because now I'll be the one fucking you.
Also, what can go wrong with people ignoring Abacus Cassandra Cinch? Most Everything.
Sour crossed her arms. “I liked it better when you barely paid attention to the world outside your headphones.”
“I liked it better when I barely paid attention to the world outside my headphones! But guess what? That world almost got annihilated last week, and no one’s talking about it ‘cause they’ll fall down the same existential hole I did.” Judging by the wide-eyed expressions among the listeners, many already had. “I like this universe; I live here and it’s where I keep my stuff. So if the school’s average GPA drops by point-oh-three but we all graduate sane, healthy, and alive, I call that a fair trade.”
Prior to removing the headphones, Lemon didn't think people around her were real (Vinyl has it even worse).
“That isn’t completely off the table. We don’t know how magic works. But there are mundane dangers out there too.” Lemon winced. “I hate to say this, but… given how tightly wound she was, how shitty the school was to her, would you really put it past Twilight to come in with a gun one day?”
All the other kids, with them pumped-up kicks... Also, did you also call Indigo "Indiana" so many times that you ended up calling her Indy?
It’s as integral to the school as the support beams.
Bring out the jet fuel (Sugarcoat gave this joke nine out of eleven).
“Glad it’s you.” Lemon rolled her eyes. “Especially since most of the ‘compliments’ I’ve gotten today have been about my tits.”
You're not gonna make it as a porn writer. You took 1.5 chapters to mention someone's boobs rather than introduce characters by their boob size or, may Allah forgive me for uttering these words, description of their feet.
To be fair to Indigo, Twilight would never have come in with a gun. Well, not an ordinary one, possibly a nuclear powered laser or something.
Oh. Oh no.
Just because pride is leaking through doesn't mean that the other sins aren't as well...
Oh nooooo this is gonna go amazingly bad and I don't have any POPCORN.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Gotten lots of smiles from this so far. Each plot thread is quite interesting, in terms of character and worldbuilding both. My guess as to the hell portal? After moving, it's leaking Lust instead of Pride. Soon we're gonna have girls hilting themselves on those stupid rooftop spikes.
Besides, if the fell energies become too much of a problem, Shining Armor can throw on a white suit and sunglasses, hop through the portal, and bring back some demon girls to help fix things. And possibly, if Cadance approves, form a harem on the side.
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That is so on the nose for them it's ridiculous.
~Skeeter The Lurker
I mean, the obvious solution is to turn the Hell-o-nator to 'sloth.' Everyone takes naps, instead of raising mayhem.
I love a good slow burn, and this one looks great so far.
Do you have a schedule of any sort, or will you upload the chapters as they are ready?
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"Common misconception. Lasers are a grossly inefficient means of harming others when compared to firearms. Well, when magic isn't involved, anyway. And that's saying nothing of a man-portable nuclear reactor—"
"Twilight."
"Oh! Right! Most importantly, I'd never do that kind of thing, even at my worst. Sorry, Sunset, I was distracted by the lasers."
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You have plenty of time to pop yourself some. No idea when the next chapter's coming out.
10324592
Uh... Looking at the building, they'd have quite a few logistical issues to tackle. This is a gate to Hell, not the Plane of Pink Energy. (Too much of which is dangerous.)
10324771
Obvious, yes. There's just one catch: How do you do that?
10324978
Nothing concrete in terms of scheduling, I'm afraid. They'll be ready when they're ready.
Oh, I am extremely interested in where this is going.
Sugarcoat: "That was a 7/10 wank. You should consider never doing that ever again, because now I'll be the one fucking you.
Also, what can go wrong with people ignoring Abacus Cassandra Cinch? Most Everything.
Prior to removing the headphones, Lemon didn't think people around her were real (Vinyl has it even worse).
All the other kids, with them pumped-up kicks... Also, did you also call Indigo "Indiana" so many times that you ended up calling her Indy?
Bring out the jet fuel (Sugarcoat gave this joke nine out of eleven).
You're not gonna make it as a porn writer. You took 1.5 chapters to mention someone's boobs rather than introduce characters by their boob size or, may Allah forgive me for uttering these words, description of their feet.