An overdose of her sister's secret pills sends Sweetie Belle back for her next year of University with a much fuller figure, and an unexpected encounter.
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Always happy to see a new chapter! Our boy's in rough shape but I'm sure he'll be back in action in no time ^^
Very much looking forward to the next one!
It's great to see a new chapter out! I'm happy to see you're still going strong with this! Even though I'm mostly in it for the expansion smut, I love this story! I love the fact Sweetie Belle, who was mostly trying to show reservations, truly loves Chrome. But she's having a hard time accepting it cause of her massive bosom. Worried she's only loved for her body.
I truly can't wait for the next chapter
Good chapter.
I hope the captain goes for the full investigation. Hey, aren't Truth Spells a thing in Equestria?
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I believe that goes against free will and all that stuff. Wasn’t there a FIM episode where talk of making one came up?
Plus, one has to figure the cadets are maybe not a perfect in Military circles.
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I wouldn’t call it “love,” more like the idea that there might be “something there.”
She’s just known this guy on and off over nearly a semester in college. She’s juggling a number of things from classes to dealing with her still growing chest. She’s not quite in the “I want a boyfriend” state of mind.
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Ah, gotchya. I see what you're trying to do now. Well, I still enjoy the story. I can't wait to see the conclusion to this story.
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I don’t know if I mentioned it, but there’s also the fact that Sweetie Belle dropped her first year major, so she’s currently undecided on just what she wants to pursue.
Though also for her reaction to Chrome being attacked, I feel she’s reacting just like she and her friends would if someone got hurt. They would surely keep that level of heart they had as little fillies.
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You didn't. I don't know why that thought never occured to me... well, they're grown ups now so I can't exactly say I don't see that happening when their friends are seriously hurt.
Honestly, you're more down to earth with romance than I even thought. Kudos, man. Really do enjoy the effort.
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My goal when writing this was to make it it’s own world so I couldn’t just be thought of as telling the same story as in Applebloom and Coral Leaf’s story. In that story, the love story is a bit more of a film/TV story in that the teenage couple fall in love over the course of weeks to a few months.
In this story, I wanted a more serious mindset with the girls in their college age years. I was mainly thinking of transposing that seriousness that the FIM series did to the Mane 6, where it was more about what they were doing and who they are rather than getting them coupled.
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That's fair. A very slow buildup with in-character approaches is always valid. Having Chrome's ability to use magic becoming a hurdle for him to overcome and dealing with punks in the Cadets. And seeing him being stubborn and trying to act tough.
Sweetie Belle having to deal with college, her very slowly growing burdens causing her no end of trouble in social life, and is helping Chrome overcome his hurdle on top of her own studies.
Setting this into the world where life rears it's ugly head from time to time. I can truly appreciate the work you're putting into this story.
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Hmm, maybe.
I would agree that forcing someone to tell the truth via spell or potion would violate thier rights and free will.
However, I would argue that if the teller agreed/swore to tell the truth in a legal proceeding, then a Truth spell would be permissible. Indeed, if the dependent balked at accepting a Truth spell after swearing to only tell the truth, that would be a mark against him. To protect the rights of the dependent, im sure there would be very strict rules on the use of Truth spells, and on the questions the prosecution was allowed to ask.
I would also point out that as Chrome Shield and his (supposed) attackers are military officers in training, this might become a military trial, were the rules are different. For instance, in a military trial you do not have the right to remain silent, you must answer the prosecution or be dishonorably discharged from the military.