Booze, loneliness, and a grumpy drinking partner... A typical Friday night for Delta Vee, but a strange potion, and a failed attempt at flirting sends Delta home alone packing some new equipment... where her daughter has shown up on her doorstep!
Back as promised. You're going to have to really impress me, me boyo. There's already a lot of really amazing futanari out there.
Her eyes flicked from her daughter’s hooves and back to her aching cock... it would feel so good for that need to be salved, quenched by her little hooves.
Maybe the best a shitty drunken MILF like her could offer was the next best substitute for love: a romping tumble in the hay and whispered nothings that would dissolve into an awkward morning.
Jesus Christ, you stepped on this scene's emotion badly. I get it that this is consistent with Delta's character but this dark streak of yours is popping up at a bad time for me. Hopefully, you recover later.
awkward morning.
“Yeah.”
Eliminate this gap.
It was like her whole body had started to smile.
Awwwww! What a cute description!
Why did Apogee want her love so much? She was just some bitchy old mare. She didn’t understand, couldn’t understand why the kid could be so moved by such a simple touch.
You know what else is a slimy wetness? The rotting decomposed zombie woman in the bathtub from Stanley Kubrick's "The Shining". Please exterminate this adjective from your clopfiction thesaurus with extreme prejudice. Why can't you just say "slick"? This does not expand dong!
fun, slippery night.
Slippery! Now there's a good one. She's like a foal on her little slip and slide!
Delta could feel a steady pressure building in her loins, like a bubble of magma rising toward the cone of a volcano. A hot, aching pain that was twisting through her guts and building moment after moment.
I can't say I've ever felt pain before I jizzed and I've certainly done more than my fair share of jizzing.
Delta groaned, throwing her head back onto a cushion in frustration and staring at the ceiling. “Kid, you have no idea. I don’t know how stallions don’t spend every waking moment trying to blast a fresh hot gooey load.”
“They kinda do…” Apogee quipped.
Touché!
Now I really wish I'd committed to writing Roseluck foalcon. I swear I would if I were actually popular and could make up for the 30-40 DVs I'd be guaranteed to rack up.
Her dick really didn’t want her to do that. And the booze in her system was certainly helping to steer her conscience towards an option that would lead to a self-satisfying income.
I think you meant outcome.
Apogee’s smile was pure. A joy of the highest caliber - she was so happy to make her mother feel good. It was like a beam of sunshine from Celestia herself had parted the clouds to land on her and make her shine with delight.
You really have gotten good with your narrator by 2020. The difference is striking between this and your older works.
Apogee pulled back, leaving a wet smacking sound as the only evidence she’d just been kissing her mother’s cockhead.
I just wish you had access to a better list of adjectives back then. Truly your worst enemy but one that is so easily fixable.
“Well, I get lots of practice with… my coltfriend… Dangler.”
Do you know what would have been the funnier joke for me? If instead of calling him some random word starting with a D she called him Daddy-O — like have her go "Dad-Daddy-O!" like MJ Fox in Back to The Future. I'd have lost my shit!
Apogee considered her for a moment, tilting her head. Then that million-bit smile broke out once again.
“I love you, Mom. I love making you feel good.”
God, she's so FUCKED IN THE HEAD!
Apogee kept her eyes on her mom - somehow managing to still smile as she once again opened her mouth and took the whole, pre-cum burbling flare into her maw.
Ooo! That was good. Keep on that!
‘Yes yes yes yes! Deeper, deeper! Get all of it in there!’ Delta couldn’t resist pulling on Apogee’s head any longer… starting to slowly apply pressure as she helped the filly take more stallioncock down her throat - a bulge appearing in her slender, yellow neck.
There ya go. Cloppy! Keep it up, lad!
‘Yes! Yes! Choke on my dick! Take it all!’
Did Sorren hack your account and edit this in?
She jerked back slightly, starting to pull backward on her hooves, starting the process of trying to pry her filly off her cock.
AHH! Somebody get this wounded pigeon piranha off my dick!
She could just see her daughter over the rise of her teats, the top of her muzzle scrunched up in focus and effort as she jammed the well-sized bulged down her throat so far it was nearly reaching her breastbone.
Mentioning the teats and the futa cock in the same paragraph. That's a canny move, Cloppy. You've impressed me. I just showed this to Firesight over Skype and he was stunned by how good this line was. He said he could take lessons from you! That is high praise!
She could feel her balls, already aching and twisting throughout the evening, suddenly start to shoot up toward her torso - the muscles around her prostate starting to squeeze in involuntary pulses that raced up her length. She could feel her flare begin to fatten and widen, converting from its knobby ridge into a saucer-shaped plug.
Goddamn, you are putting on a show with these anatomical descriptions. How did you learn to thrash like this!?
She’d lost count of her spurts after the tenth shot of hot, steaming semen plastered the upper roof of Apogee’s mouth, carefully positioned in front of her flare, eager to receive more of her mother’s sticky loads. The filly hadn’t stopped pumping the jumping, jerking shaft, maintaining her insistent and demanding rate as Delta remained paralyzed by sheer sensation in her hooves. After that splattering tenth blast, Delta saw her daughter being forced to shut her overflowing mouth and take a hearty swallow of her load, as additional creamy-white fluid escaped from the corners of her muzzle.
I love that little dance you did with the 'jumping, jerking shaft' part. I can't even get turned on by this because I'm too dialed-in to the sheer technical brilliance on display here.
“Hee hee. Wow, Mom.” Apogee giggled, as she slurped up the last oozing drip from Delta’s flare. “That was as much as… uh… well…” She mulled something in her mouth. “You really taste different though, a little bitter.”
That has literal and metaphorical value for sure, given she'd just consumed a potion and is in fact a total bitch.
“Probably your cigarettes - I can tell when dad sneaks them too…”
10342487 This is so weird! A comment that's actually about my writing and not some crazy political fire-bomb-war between the right and left? Am I on the right website?
Kidding of course... and so happy to get a comment like this again! Thanks AJ!
She could just see her daughter over the rise of her teats, the top of her muzzle scrunched up in focus and effort as she jammed the well-sized bulged down her throat so far it was nearly reaching her breastbone.
How did I miss this during my read? You have a typo here. well-sized bulge not bulged.
Oh
cumnow Delta...Don't fall asleep on the sweet girl. xD
Just asking,
Is the NSFW gif link supposed to be seperated like that? ^^
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Yes. You're not supposed to link to NSFW so the workaround is to break the link or to only put the post number.
Damn... Like a Gysir... Fabulous Delicious story chapter
So this is how Delta and Jet get back together. They both end up getting in a three way their daughter
Another well done chapter, Apogee's nice n basted, like a good lil filly.
Good show, good show.
I almost didnt notice the NSFW because im reading this in ultra dark mode where it blends into the background
I'll be honest, I really want a story where Delta (and to a lesser degree, Jet) find out about Apogee's relationship with the other.
Back as promised. You're going to have to really impress me, me boyo. There's already a lot of really amazing futanari out there.
Oh God... dammit!
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Jesus Christ, you stepped on this scene's emotion badly. I get it that this is consistent with Delta's character but this dark streak of yours is popping up at a bad time for me. Hopefully, you recover later.
Eliminate this gap.
Awwwww! What a cute description!
She likes ears as much as I do! Actually that's total bullshit. No one loves ears as much as I do.
You know what else is a slimy wetness? The rotting decomposed zombie woman in the bathtub from Stanley Kubrick's "The Shining". Please exterminate this adjective from your clopfiction thesaurus with extreme prejudice. Why can't you just say "slick"? This does not expand dong!
Slippery! Now there's a good one. She's like a foal on her little slip and slide!
I can't say I've ever felt pain before I jizzed and I've certainly done more than my fair share of jizzing.
Touché!
Now I really wish I'd committed to writing Roseluck foalcon. I swear I would if I were actually popular and could make up for the 30-40 DVs I'd be guaranteed to rack up.
I think you meant outcome.
You really have gotten good with your narrator by 2020. The difference is striking between this and your older works.
I just wish you had access to a better list of adjectives back then. Truly your worst enemy but one that is so easily fixable.
Do you know what would have been the funnier joke for me? If instead of calling him some random word starting with a D she called him Daddy-O — like have her go "Dad-Daddy-O!" like MJ Fox in Back to The Future. I'd have lost my shit!
God, she's so FUCKED IN THE HEAD!
Ooo! That was good. Keep on that!
There ya go. Cloppy! Keep it up, lad!
Did Sorren hack your account and edit this in?
AHH! Somebody get this
wounded pigeonpiranha off my dick!Mentioning the teats and the futa cock in the same paragraph. That's a canny move, Cloppy. You've impressed me. I just showed this to Firesight over Skype and he was stunned by how good this line was. He said he could take lessons from you! That is high praise!
Goddamn, you are putting on a show with these anatomical descriptions. How did you learn to thrash like this!?
I love that little dance you did with the 'jumping, jerking shaft' part. I can't even get turned on by this because I'm too dialed-in to the sheer technical brilliance on display here.
That has literal and metaphorical value for sure, given she'd just consumed a potion and is in fact a total bitch.
Ffffffffffffffffffffffffuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
Yeah I'm glad I faved this already. The scene wasn't great starting off but it roared to life like Moonlight Sonata after the first movement.
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This is so weird! A comment that's actually about my writing and not some crazy political fire-bomb-war between the right and left? Am I on the right website?
Kidding of course... and so happy to get a comment like this again! Thanks AJ!
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How did I miss this during my read? You have a typo here. well-sized bulge not bulged.