Everbody Hates Eqeustria

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So my names chris im an african american boy who goes to canterlot high and to say the least i hate it you try to like it when nobdy ever knows your there its my life

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1.Welcome to my life · 31st Mar 2020 · 1,031 words
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2.Life is not a joke · 5th Apr 2020 · 1,094 words
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Vocaroo Five Minute #1 · Apr 4th, 2020 · · · 1.Welcome to my life ·

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Dragonslayer Ornstein #2 · Apr 4th, 2020 · 3 · · 1.Welcome to my life ·

Hoo boy... This needs a great deal of work. Spelling mistakes, grammar mistakes, formatting errors, the works. I’d recommend a tour of the new author help group to get a good idea of what you could do to improve a bit. Your story has something that’s hard to come by these days, an interesting new premise. I can’t think of any other fic on here that has anything to do with the “Everybody Hates Chris” TV show. So keep trying and don’t give up! A little polish goes a long way in making your words easier on the eyes for readers, as of now I had to really try to get through the first paragraph. Maybe see if you can get someone to help with proofreading? There’s a group for that as well. Good luck!

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