After the emergence of the Crystal empire and the defeat of their Tyrant King. It's at this time, Sunburst leaves Princess Celestia's school to live in the Crystal Empire. Although, Sunburst stubbles upon what seem to be a broken horn. So in the name of knowledge, he takes it for research purposes. What could possibly go wrong...
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Not perfect, but I'm curious to see where this goes.
I might not one to talk, but I would highly suggest installing "Grammarly". It's free, and while it's not perfect, it's what I use to filter out 95% of my typing mistakes. Some are still going to slip through, but, from personal experience, it's so much better than having nothing.
Other than that, good story so far! : )
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Thanks for the suggestion, I'll keep it in mind.
Very excited to see where this goes
I'm loving it so far!!
This is really cute! I hope there's more soon.
Writing still need some work, but I have seen worst, I do like the premise through. I wonder his Sombra will pray on his insecurities with his weak magic and that this is all an act to manipulate Sunburst? I just love brainwashed ponies and seeing them being twisted and corrupted. From the setting I take it that this is going to be an alternate version of events , I wonder his Sombra will prevent Sunburst from reconnecting with Starlight and help save the Crystal Empire? Will he try to steal Flurry Heart from the royal couple or maybe corrupt in turn Thorax?
By the way if you are looking for a cover art I am open for commissions, you can go see mt DA gallery in the link bellow and just to give you an idea of what I can do I also did this cover art not so long ago. Good luck on your story
https://www.deviantart.com/amalgamzaku
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Not even a full sentence in and I already notice that this needs a spellcheck.
Not a good sign of quality, that.
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I'm sorry to hear that.
This fanfic may not be my best work, but that doesn't stop it from improving in the future. I'll be going back to the past chapters to fix spelling mistakes and improve it later down the line but as of now, I'll be working on posting more chapters to further the story and plot. Please bare with me, I spend more time working on my actual stories than my fanfics. So, there's less time and effort put into them.
I hope you understand and will continue to read my story.
If you can, tell me where my errors are for I can correct them.
I do hope you continue this. It looks so promising.
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I apologize for the wait , the next chapter of this story will be coming out very soon.
I’m glad that you’re continuing this fic!
(We need more stories with m/m pairings)
Nice to see an update on this again
Wow! I'm so glad that this updated. Here's to hoping more comes soon.