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Pinkie Pie struggles with the day-to-day life as possibly the last living creature on Earth. When an unexpected acquaintance appears, he and Pinkie try to find a way to undo whatever it was that caused their predicament? Will they succeed?

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She missed the contrasts of day and night, but long ago accepted the reality of her situation.

Are you implying that the sun and moon have stopped being moved, or not? Either way, I'm intrigued.

What happened? Why is Pinkie the last living creature on Equus?

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I thought that it would be obvious because she says "Good morning" to the sun and the moon at the same time.

Is Sans Smirk a literal opposite of Pinkie? I thought he was Maud at first.

Comment posted by Coyotek4 deleted Mar 29th, 2020

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Sans was a one-shot character from Season 9; he was in the same episode as Cheese Sandwich.

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I've never seen "Pinkie Pride", but now that you mention it, I might watch it today.
Oh, it was “The Last Laugh”.

When I first started reading this I couldn't help but think about a certain game involving some co workers mysteriously disappearing... but I very heavily doubt that has anything to do with this story. Still though, it's really good so far.

I’m still wondering what caused this. I mean, now we know what happened to everycreature, but why so sudden? And why did they disappear like discord almost did in “Discordant harmony?”

Now that I think about it, this might have been related to the “snap” from avengers infinity war. (If you haven’t seen it, watch it)

Up until now, I thought that Sans was the skeleton guy from Undertale or whatever the game is called

Please tell me that pinkie and sans will be able to bring all the other creatures back. Without them, life is just plain. Nothing exciting, no parties, no adventures, no dangers, no enemies to defeat, nothing to do but sit around talking to inanimate objects to pass the time. It would be like a nightmare.

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What was the game called?

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The Stanley Parable is an interactive drama and walking simulator designed by American developer Davey Wreden. The game was originally released on July 27, 2011 as a free mod for Half-Life 2.

Now pinkie is truly alone

Is she going to go back to rescue Sans Smirk?

I’m positive that I’m not the only one, but if I was all alone, I would turn to my most hated enemies just like pinkie did

Oh man poor Pinkie. She’s exactly like the pony I’d expect to be falling off the edge of sanity after so much isolation.

then thirty more days or so until Sans Smirk came by

Wait, what? I thought he appeared on the thirtieth day.

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An additional thirty days (or perhaps more or less) had passed after Pinkie's megaphone stunt.

Tirek and Chrysalis are going to come back when they realize that Pinkie is serious about them being the last 4 creatures left, right

Would you alert me when a new chapter is released?

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You could just track it.

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The default bookshelf with the green bookmark icon lets you track stories. When a new chapter is posted, the number in brackets next to “library” in the top bar will go up.

Choking because of the feelings that are being forced into her:rainbowlaugh:

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Could you alert me when a new chapter is released?

That last part seems oddly familiar...et tu, Robin Williams? :pinkiehappy:

“And then there’s the Tirek I know, the one who escaped Tartarus, knowing nothing of friendship and strong family bonds, knowing only that you want to ‘show everyone’ … Tirek, you need to hear this from someone who care:” Pinkie walks up to Tirek and embraces him. “It’s not your fault.”

*cares

Also, I think you should spend more time on these chapters. There's no reason that Pinkie talking to each of the villains couldn't have all been in one chapter.

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Fixed the typo, thx.
In general, I prefer shorter chapters; it's a personal preference.

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I may have been watching GWH recently. But did you spot my reference to 'Breaking Bad'?

You don't need a psychoanalyst … you need a psycho analyst.

Can’t wait for final chapter :raritystarry:

How does Chrysalis know there are no changelings in the hive?

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No, I don't watch that show. The only reference I got was the one from that Robin Williams movie, "Great Minds", I believe was the title.

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I don’t think that this is something that can be prevented like the time loop from “It’s about time”

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In my mind (and I did try to account for as much in this story): there was enough time for Chrysalis to fly to the Hive in back, in the time it took for (a) Tirek to then depart, (b) Cozy to befriend Pinkie, (c) Pinkie to tell stories about Starlight to Cozy, (d) Tirek to return, and (e) Pinkie to get through to Tirek.

Admittedly, I may have taken a bit of creative license with the timeframe.

I actually thought that this was going to be the last chapter, but I guess I was wrong.

I wonder where is Sans Smirk?

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He will probably re-appear in the next chapter.

“Every story has a happy ending,” Cheese replies, “you just have to know where to end it.”

Nice comment, Cheese.

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