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Heitomos 201

Joined December 2011
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    Heitomos's Stories (2)

    • White Demure
      A filly is stricken with a terrible disease. Can she be saved in time?

      45,890 words · 2,825 views · 46 likes · 0 dislikes
    • Origins
      A tale spawned of a fleeting though, of a mare trying to protect herself, and her sister.
      58,101 words · 143 views · 5 likes · 0 dislikes
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    When a filly falls ill with a mysterious disease, it's up to Twilight Sparkle, Applejack, Rarity, Pinkie Pie, Fluttershy, and Rainbow Dash to try and find her a cure! Can they find it in time, or will this be it for the little one?

    First Published
    17th Dec 2011
    Last Modified
    18th Dec 2011

    Comments ( 15 )

    #1 · Chapter 11 · 74w, 10h ago · · ·
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    Yay, it's been transferred here! :yay:

    #2 · Chapter 11 · 74w, 10h ago · · ·
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    Re-reading the story to mark all of the chapters as read, and I realized that you did a flawless job loading and firing a Chekhov's Gun.  Well done!

    #3 · Chapter 11 · 74w, 4h ago · · ·
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    >>72036

    Why thank you! I've always wanted to do one of those. Just been waiting for my chance to use it!

    #4 · Chapter 12 · 73w, 5d ago · · ·
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    *standing ovation*

    #5 · Chapter 12 · 73w, 5d ago · · ·
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    This was great story:pinkiehappy:

    #6 · Chapter 12 · 73w, 5d ago · · ·
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    A really fun fic. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this adventure from beginning to end. Excellent job!

    #7 · Chapter 12 · 73w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Vas good trip! Heitomos is kredit to team!

    #8 · Chapter 12 · 73w, 5d ago · · ·
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    awesome story can't wait for another rousing adventure

    #9 · Chapter 12 · 73w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Thanks for the kind words, guys. Makes me happy.

    As for jwil, there might be a sequel. Two, in fact, like I originally planned in this story's first conception. (Fun fact, this story was made to add weight to the story I originally wanted to write, as sort of a prequel to set the tone/world.) The first sequel is gunna be a bit of drama/slice-of-life, while the second will be back to good ole' adventuring. But that's a ways away, I think.

    #10 · Chapter 12 · 73w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>75277

    you mean there's gonna be more ? wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee:pinkiehappy:

    Do not protect yourself by a fence, but rather by your friends.~Czech Proverb :twilightsmile:

    #11 · Chapter 12 · 70w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Great story I cried manly tears at a few parts:fluttercry: ( a few spelling a grammar mistakes tho )

    #12 · Chapter 1 · 38w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I hope zecora can help. If not well then i dont know what will happen:fluttershysad:

    #13 · Chapter 5 · 29w, 4d ago · · ·
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    #14 · Chapter 1 · 20w, 5d ago · · ·
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    wirklich gute liebe es ;3

    #15 · Chapter 12 · 17w, 3d ago · · ·
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    I've been waiting for this to show up here! Awesome! I love this story! You are an artist!

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