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Heitomos

Joined December 2011
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Just an author in training, using pony fiction to improved my writing skills. And so far, it's working!

Stories (1)

  • White Demure
    A filly is stricken with a terrible disease. Can she be saved in time?

    45,890 words · 5,051 views · 53 likes · 2 dislikes

When a filly falls ill with a mysterious disease, it's up to Twilight Sparkle, Applejack, Rarity, Pinkie Pie, Fluttershy, and Rainbow Dash to try and find her a cure! Can they find it in time, or will this be it for the little one?

First Published
17th Dec 2011
Last Modified
18th Dec 2011

Comments ( 15 )

#1 · Chapter 11 · 140w, 9h ago · · ·

Yay, it's been transferred here! :yay:

#2 · Chapter 11 · 140w, 9h ago · · ·

Re-reading the story to mark all of the chapters as read, and I realized that you did a flawless job loading and firing a Chekhov's Gun.  Well done!

#3 · Chapter 11 · 140w, 3h ago · · ·

>>72036

Why thank you! I've always wanted to do one of those. Just been waiting for my chance to use it!

#4 · Chapter 12 · 139w, 5d ago · · ·

*standing ovation*

#5 · Chapter 12 · 139w, 5d ago · · ·

This was great story:pinkiehappy:

#6 · Chapter 12 · 139w, 5d ago · · ·

A really fun fic. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this adventure from beginning to end. Excellent job!

#7 · Chapter 12 · 139w, 5d ago · · ·

Vas good trip! Heitomos is kredit to team!

#8 · Chapter 12 · 139w, 5d ago · · ·

awesome story can't wait for another rousing adventure

#9 · Chapter 12 · 139w, 5d ago · · ·

Thanks for the kind words, guys. Makes me happy.

As for jwil, there might be a sequel. Two, in fact, like I originally planned in this story's first conception. (Fun fact, this story was made to add weight to the story I originally wanted to write, as sort of a prequel to set the tone/world.) The first sequel is gunna be a bit of drama/slice-of-life, while the second will be back to good ole' adventuring. But that's a ways away, I think.

#10 · Chapter 12 · 139w, 5d ago · · ·

>>75277

you mean there's gonna be more ? wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee:pinkiehappy:

Do not protect yourself by a fence, but rather by your friends.~Czech Proverb :twilightsmile:

#11 · Chapter 12 · 136w, 2d ago · · ·

Great story I cried manly tears at a few parts:fluttercry: ( a few spelling a grammar mistakes tho )

#12 · Chapter 1 · 104w, 5d ago · · ·

I hope zecora can help. If not well then i dont know what will happen:fluttershysad:

#13 · Chapter 5 · 95w, 4d ago · · ·
#14 · Chapter 1 · 86w, 5d ago · · ·

wirklich gute liebe es ;3

#15 · Chapter 12 · 83w, 3d ago · · ·

I've been waiting for this to show up here! Awesome! I love this story! You are an artist!

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