A Mile a Minute

Rainbow Dash is used to feeling her heart beat a mile a minute... while performing stunts with the Wonderbolts, or fighting any threats to Equestria with her friends. But as she flies over Ponyville heading to the castle of the lavender alicorn who stole her heart she's coming to realize that as long as they're together her heart may never stop pounding. Not that she's complaining.

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redandready45

redandready45 #1 · Mar 11th, 2020 · 2 · ·

Aside from a few grammatical errors, you are off to a good start.

Corax Morn

Corax Morn #2 · Mar 11th, 2020 · 2 · ·

Not bad. A few spelling mistakes here and there, that I will probably point out when I am not on mobile, but nothing large enough to break my immersion in the story itself.

lLoveRainbowDash

lLoveRainbowDash #3 · Mar 11th, 2020 · 1 · ·

That was amazing.

TraumaLane

TraumaLane #4 · Mar 11th, 2020 · · ·

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Thank you so much I’m glad you enjoyed the story. and for the follow. I’ll try to fix the errors if I can find them it’s been a while since I’ve written anything but I appreciate the feedback

TraumaLane

TraumaLane #5 · Mar 11th, 2020 · · ·

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Thank you so much I’m glad you enjoyed it!

TraumaLane

TraumaLane #6 · Mar 11th, 2020 · · ·

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Cool thanks for giving my story a try, it’s been a long time since I’ve had to write so I appreciate the feedback. I’d be happy to know where I can improve to put out better stories and I hope you did enjoy it despite my misspelling