Tamer of wolves, purveyor of horse smut and ShiningSparkle shipper. I did write something eventually, even if it's not much.
This story is a sequel to Nightmare Night, a Sister's Plight
Twilight Sparkle is a responsible pony. But even she can get overwhelmed sometimes. A few years after taking over from Celestia and Luna, she deals with a new development with the help of her friends and family.
Written for New Year, New Wincest Contest
A direct sequel to my earlier story Nightmare Night, a Sister's Plight
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She didn't get the memo yet, huh?
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I expect to encounter some disturbing imagery in My Little Pony incest fan fiction, but this is just too much.
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Well, thank you for reading my story. I hope you liked it.
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Having not read the prequels, I think the idea is fundamentally good, but you didn't get what you could've out of it. There are various hints of drama and conflict that might happen, and then none of it materializes. What if it leaked out to the public that Twilight's baby-daddy is her own brother? What if Cadance found herself much less comfortable with her brother fathering somepony else's child than she had been with the extramarital sex alone? What if one of these characters had wanted an abortion? What if the kid was none too pleased when she learned for herself who her father was? Etc.
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True. I guess part of me wanted to show that the incestuos relationship could still work and function, so I didn’t want to go into a ton of drama. Mostly it’s just concerns of what could have happened. I might do a sequel down the line that does address the kid finding out her parentage, but I probably won’t have it be a widely known thing. Though I do get what you’re saying. There’s a lot more I could do with drama and stuff, that just wasn’t the direction I wanted the story to go in.
Some Winter's Child vibes right here...
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Yeah, that was a big inspiration. It’s honestly my favorite story that I’ve read on fimfic. Hopefully mine is still different enough to stand out.
First, I wanted to note how odd it was that there was no political or news type shit over Twilight being pregnant from an unknown lover.
But second and most importantly... did you seriously just imply that being born an earth pony is a DEFECT?! That has to be one of the most racist pony things I've ever heard. I would understand if she was a unicorn without a horn or a horn that was unstable. But calling her an earth pony... a defect...
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Thanks for reading the story.
In response to the feedback, yes I figured that there would be backlash over the father being unknown, that just isn't so much the focus in this particular story.
And secondly, I in no way believe that being an Earth Pony is a "defect", but a high-class unicorn might. The views expressed by characters in my stories are not necessarily my own views.
Anyway, thank you for the feedback.
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Amazingly prompt reply.
Ah, I hadn't even considered that it was just the doctor being racist. (Doctors aren't supposed to say anything even when the baby comes out looking nothing like the parents)
I am enjoying your lil incest saga though.
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Oh. I had no idea that doctors were supposed to remain so silent. Shows my lack of research I suppose. But I am glad that you're enjoying these stories, that's always nice to hear.
Is there a sequel?
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Yes, All of the Above. Though the sequel bit is part way through the story.