Back in Coolsville, the citizens went about their normal lives completely unaware of the horror making its way toward their front door. Currently, a large amount of daily commuters found themselves stuck in a massive traffic jam holding up the entire street. Many of them honked their horns in irritation while others voiced their frustration rather loudly.
Sounds like us on a daily basis, doesn’t it?
You have absolutely no idea, man.
Oh… I believe I do.
“Move that worthless piece of tin!” A man yelled, honking his horn.
While the many denizens worried themselves with the traffic, an even larger threat loomed behind them. A giant, ghostly pirate ship glided through the air directly over the citizens, who all looked in horror at the sight directly over their heads. The other citizens panicked and ran as fast as they could. Aboard the ghost ship were the evil masked figure, Chrysalis, and the spirit of Sombra observing the chaos below with wicked satisfaction.
“Citizens!” The masked figure stated loudly. “Turn in Mystery Inc. Your reward: We’ll let you live!”
The evil masked figure laughed darkly as the Tar Monster rose up from the street below, taking the form of a giant monstrous hand before regaining its original form.
“My monsters can make life very unpleasant.”
The Tar Monster spread his tar all across the street, trapping any unfortunate souls in its grasp as the ghost ship floated overhead.
“Find me Mystery Inc… NOW!!!”
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Back in the Mystery Machine, the gang and the Equestrians continued their way to the safe location Velma told them about. All the while, they watched Heather Jasper Howe give an emergency update on events transpiring in Coolsville.
“Heather Jasper-Howe with an emergency update for Investigative Probe. A monster army has invaded Coolsville. Angry citizens have gathered outside Mystery Inc.’s offices in protest. They’re insisting the gang cooperate with the Evil Masked Figure’s demands.”
“Wow, things are getting worse by the minute,” Twilight sighed.
“You’d think in times of crisis like this everyone would band together to fight this,” Rarity spoke.
“Oh, they are banding together all right,” Rainbow frowned. “Against us!”
“Well, mainly against them,” Pinkie gestured to Mystery Inc.
This caused the entire gang to look back at Pinkie with heated glares. Pinkie chuckled nervously before ducking back down and everyone returned their attention to the screen. Before their eyes, the crowd angrily chanted and even called Mystery Inc. ‘Mystery Stink’. They then screamed and ducked as the Pterodactyl Ghost flew over them.
In the meantime, the Zombie started running rampant through the crowd and the whole thing broke into full blown panic. But that did not stop one determined newsman to have an interview with the creature.
“Excuse me, sir,” A newsman asked. “Do you have anything to say for yourself?”
The zombie snarled and hurled all over him, much to his disgust and dismay. Suffice to say, Scooby found what the zombie did hilarious. The Great Dane laughed a bit before noticing everyone glaring at him and shrunk down alongside Pinkie, who merely patted his shoulder.
“I beg you, Mystery Inc., if you can hear me, turn yourselves in!” Heather begged onscreen.
“But if we do, he’ll get the control panel back,” Fred spoke. “And the city will be in worse shape.”
“We’d be playing into his hands,” Daphne agreed.
“Not to mention we’d be giving ourselves in to Chrysalis and Sombra,” Shining shook his head. “Celestia only knows what those two will do.”
“And Equestria as we know would cease to exist!” Cadance nodded.
“Please, for our city’s sake…”
The sound of screaming on air caused every camera to turn toward the door only to see the Black Knight knock it down.
“Sorry… you’re cancelled.”
And then… the screen went dark as everything went off the air and all in the Mystery Machine looked on in shock and fear. The entire city was overrun by monsters at this very moment, and it seemed they were failing to do ‘anything’ to help. It was unknown right now how things could possibly get worse, but they were pretty certain they’d find it.
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After driving for quite a while, deep in the woods outside Coolsville, the Mystery Machine finally pulled up along an old shack near the edge of a lake. Everyone eventually got out of the van and looked at the old place.
“So, what is this place?” Twilight asked.
“I’ll tell you what it is,” Rainbow replied. “A dump!”
As everyone emerged one by one, Shaggy helped Velma out of the van.
“The old high school clubhouse,” Velma informed. “We should be safe here.”
This caused Rainbow to freeze and stammer.
“Uh, and by dump I mean—uh—I’m so sorry.”
“Real smooth hon,” Applejack sighed.
“The place looks like it hasn’t been used in ages,” Rarity observed.
“We haven’t been here in years,” Daphne told her.
Fred, on the other hand, seemed a little distant and miserable compared to the others. A pout was on his face as he sat inside the van.
“Freddy, are you okay?” Daphne asked, concerned. “Do you wanna talk?”
“Talking’s for wimps,” Fred pouted. “It’s time for action.”
As Fred emerged from the van at last, the rest of the gang made their way into the old clubhouse. All… except for Scooby, Shaggy, Scrappy, and even Spike. They just stayed outside, sitting together in the back of the Mystery Machine.
“You know guys, this Evil Masked Figure is turning Coolsville into Ghoulsville,” Shaggy sulked. “And the gang is totally taking a hit for it.”
“Reah…” Scooby frowned.
“And what’s worse is that it’s all because of us,” Scrappy sighed.
“So much for trying to become an actual hero,” Spike frowned. “Now the only I’ll be known for is helping Chrysalis and Sombra create a monster army. Hmph… story of my life.”
“Like, this is the most ‘our faultiest screw-up ever’, Scoob,” Shaggy declared.
Scooby whimpered as he laid his head on Shaggy’s shoulder, while everyone else went up to the clubhouse unaware of the boys’ melancholy.
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The clubhouse lights switched on soon as Velma pulled the switch on an old generator. As their eyes adjusted, they looked around the old place.
“At least the lights still work,” Fluttershy said.
“Sure does,” Velma replied, opening a hatch. “Oh, look. All my old tools!”
“After all our so-called success, we’re back in this old fire trap,” Fred groaned.
It was then Fred’s eyes caught sight of an old picture frame and picked it up. The picture itself was of Fred and the others that would become Mystery Inc. Of course, the kids (And even Scooby) were much younger and way before they became famous. But this photo… that brought back memories. Hanging out at the park, playing frisbee together, and the one time they could actually be just regular kids. The Equestrians approached Fred’s side and eyed the picture in his hands.
“You guys look so… uh… young…” Shining commented.
“Shining!” Cadance quietly scolded.
“It’s alright, Cadance,” Velma told her. “That was a long time ago.”
“The truth is… we’ve been solving mysteries long before the Black Knight ghost,” Daphne recalled sadly. “Of course, back then, we used to solve mysteries for the love of them. We had no reason to prove anything to anyone because just doing it is what kept us all together.”
“Yeah… and the mysteries all seemed to unravel themselves,” Velma nodded. “Sometimes the answers would just appear like magic.”
“Trust me sugarcube, we know exactly what y’all mean,” Applejack responded. “Ah can’t even tell ya the number ah times that’s happened to us.”
Flurry soon spotted something that resembled an old invention. Fred gazed at the picture, sighing in nostalgia of the good old days as Daphne and Velma came to his sides. Twilight turned back and noticed Flurry admiring the old invention. Curious herself, she approached her side.
“Whatcha got there, Flurry?” Twilight asked.
“It looks like the panel from the lab,” Flurry answered, sniffing the invention. “That scent smells… familiar.”
At that moment, Shining Armor stepped over and gently pushed Flurry aside.
“Listen Flurry, maybe it’s best if you just went and take a seat somewhere,” He told her. “Leave the work to the grown-ups.”
“Dad…”
“No!” Shining spoke sternly. “You’ve done way more than enough tonight. Sneaking out, going to a villain’s club, nearly getting blown up by potions. Need I really say more?”
Flurry’s lower lip quivered, as she tried to keep the tears from spilling.
“Y-Y-You know what…” Flurry stammered. “I’ve said nothing but positive things about you and mom, even after all the troubles we’ve had, and what do I get in return? You yell at me! Thank you so much…”
And then Flurry abruptly turned around and walked off, slightly stunning Shining Armor over how his daughter spoke to him. Twilight Sparkle and Applejack looked toward Shining with their own glares.
“What?” Shining asked.
“You can really just be unbelievable sometimes, you know that?” Twilight huffed in agitation.
Twilight just huffed and walked toward Velma as Applejack shook her head at Shining.
“Take it from a mare who has a younger sibling,” Applejack began. “I’ll admit I’m guilty of bein’ overprotective too. So can Rarity… and even Rainbow Dash. But if discouragin’ lil’ Flurry is all ya ever do, that’s all she’s ever gonna know! And that’s how she’ll be when she starts havin’ youngin’s!”
“If she has kids…” Pinkie spoke up.
One look from Applejack and Pinkie immediately zipped her lips, even throwing the ‘zipper’ away. She then turned back toward Shining for a moment, shook her head, and said nothing more before joining Rainbow Dash.
“I’m trying to do the right thing!” Shining called out. “… Am I?”
No pony answered him, not even his own wife. He just stood in his place pondering over everything, the shame spreading along his face when no one was looking. As Twilight sighed in frustration, she looked at the device alongside Velma.
“Can you tell me what this is Velma?” Twilight asked.
“Hey… my first multiple-resonance imaging device,” Velma smiled. “Made out of a crystal radio and old video games.”
All of a sudden, Velma’s eyes widened in realization as if she suddenly felt inspired.
“Wait a minute… randamonium has an algorithmic cross-currency of negative 4.121. With it, maybe… well, just maybe—”
“Okay hold up!” Rainbow butted in. “Before you go ‘any’ further, can the rest be explained in a language every pony can understand? Please?”
“We could reverse the current,” Fred informed. “And therefore, reverse the monster making process.”
“Precisely!” Velma told him. “All we need to do is rewire the control panel—”
“Bring it back to the Monster Hive and plug it into the base,” Daphne theorized.
“Right! And push the button—” Velma replied.
“And instead of creating monsters, all the monsters throughout the city will be destroyed!” Daphne concluded, smiling.
“Then we better get to work,” Twilight said elated.
“What are we standing around for slowpokes?” Rainbow piped in. “Let’s go, go, GO!”
Everyone agreed and set themselves to make things right in Coolsville again. Everyone, man, and pony, started working on some form of control panel with Twilight and Velma handling the science and logistics of the machine. Fred, Rainbow, and Shining worked the blowtorch to melt everything together. Applejack, Fluttershy, and Daphne worked together to sort all the different pieces together with Rarity observing the process to make sure all the details were functioning properly.
As Mystery Inc. and the Equestrians rewired the circuits of the control panel, Cadance found Flurry Heart sitting alone on a desk sadly pushing a model Mystery Machine toy across the counter with her magic. She could detect the sadness based on how slouched her shoulders were and the frown upon her face. The elder Princess approached her daughter, sitting quietly beside her.
“Hey Flurry,” She spoke softly. “Something the matter?”
Flurry merely shook her head, pushed the car aside, and turned away.
“N-N-Nothing’s… wrong,” Flurry replied sadly.
All at once, she felt her mother’s wing wrapped around her neck in the most comforting way. When little Flurry turned her head, she could see her mother’s concern as plain as the muzzle upon her face.
“Come on honey, you know you can tell me,” Cadance reassured. “Is this about what happened back at the Monster Hive?”
Flurry nodded her head slowly, as tears streamed from her eyes.
“All I wanted was to be like Auntie Twilight,” Flurry wept. “Brave… strong… the kind of pony who can save the day. But dad… he treats me like I’m still a baby. I understand he’s just worried about me… I do. It’s just… I wish, even ‘just’ once, he’d stop being overprotective.”
Cadance merely kissed her daughter on the forehead, granting her daughter the warmest smile.
“I get he can be overprotective sometimes, but that’s only because he loves you,” She spoke warmly. “One day, he’ll see you can care for yourself and be the great hero you are meant to be. I know that for a fact. I’m really sorry things didn’t work out as you guys hoped; I can only imagine how upset you all must be.”
Hearing this made Flurry scoff.
“I’m sorry momma, but you have absolutely no idea how we feel,” She spoke angrily. “When’s the last time you ‘failed’ to do anything? When’s the last time you, dad, or Aunt Twilight ‘failed’ anything? You can make all the mistakes you want and everything you guys do always turned out great. Every villain you fought was defeated, every friendship problem was solved, and every dispute across Eqeustria just disappeared when you guys step in. You’re the shining example of ‘perfection’… who are you to tell me you understand?”
Cadance was caught off guard by her daughter’s rant, but also understood ‘why’. Throughout the entirety of this trip, all this filly wanted was to prove she’s a strong leader capable of standing on her own hooves alone… just like her mother. She just pulled Flurry closer to herself.
“You know sweetie, ‘we’ really aren’t as great as you think,” Cadance spoke calmly. “Chrysalis trapped me in the Crystal Caves when your father and I were getting married. I never would’ve gotten out on my own if your Aunt hadn’t been dropped in those same caves. Your Aunt Twilight and the others had their own share of problems they could never resolve on their own… and they still have unresolved conflicts to work on. As for your father… well… I can’t even think of a day where he doesn’t screw up at least ‘once’.”
Hearing that actually made Flurry giggle as she leaned into her mother’s embrace, crying softly against her fur coat.
“My point is honey: No matter how hard you try to do the right thing, you’re going to screw up sometimes,” Cadance continued. “It’s all part of growing up to become the strong, dependent pony we strive to be. True… I am disappointed you lied to us and went off tonight, but I’m also extremely proud you took charge trying to solve this mystery. You remind me so much of myself… when I declared I’d ‘never’ be a damsel in distress ever again.”
And with that, she gave Flurry Heart another warm hug which made the little filly slightly better and returned the hug. She brushed her tears away, as she looked lovingly toward her mother’s eyes.
“Thanks mom,” Flurry smiled.
“You’re welcome honey,” Cadance smiled, stroking her daughter’s mane. “Now then, why don’t we go check on the boys outside? Poor dears must be cold.”
“Yeah… I’d like that.”
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Cadance and Flurry stepped from the front door of the clubhouse and spotted Shaggy, Scooby, Scrappy, and Spike staring toward the rest of the gang. They all just looked so sad, seeing their friends working together inside. There they were cleaning up the mess and the boys are just standing outside so melancholy.
“Like, they’re totally having a montage in there without us,” Shaggy sighed. “I’ll tell you one thing for sure. They don’t need ‘our’ help to figure it out.”
“Things sure do sound great in there,” Scrappy said.
Cadance and Flurry trotted toward the tree, and the little filly climbed upon Scooby’s back. She gave his neck a big hug in an effort to cheer him up. While the Great Dane did smile slightly, it vanished just as quickly.
“What’s the matter Uncle Scooby?” Flurry asked softly.
“We’re rew-ups,” Scooby pouted.
“It’s okay,” Flurry assured. ‘Everyone screws up sometimes; it’s all part of growing up. The key is to never give up, get back on your feet, and keep trying no matter what life throws at you.”
“Like maybe that would be true Flurry, if we actually ‘succeeded’ every now and then… the right way,” Shaggy frowned. “The only time we do anything right is when we accidentally plowed into the Snow Ghost because we’ve accidentally glued our feet to rocket-powered roller-skates.”
“Reah… eight stupid times…” Scooby counted.
“That’s nothing…” Scrappy brushed off. “My first solo case after ‘three’ jobs at McKay Ranch and I get captured by a homicidal bug woman and locked in a cage! It’s no wonder even movie studios think I’m a ‘bad’ joke.”
“That is pretty sad…” Spike smiled nervously. “But I’m sure you’ve had better days.”
“Oh, yeah?” Shaggy replied. “Like what?”
Spike thought back to all the previous adventures, least the ones he’d been told of.
“Oh, lots of times…” Spike assured. “Um… there was that one time you… uh, no… um… Or… how about when?... oh no, no… uh…. Or, or, OR… the day that you two were…”
“Face it, Spike,” Shaggy frowned. “We’ll never be anything but our old goofy selves.”
“Reah…” Scooby added sadly.
“You know Flurry, I wish once, just once, I could do the right thing on purpose,” Shaggy sighed. “You know? I could be a hero and save the day… but who are we kidding, right?”
“Ooh, Shaggy…” Flurry sighed.
Cadance looked on in sympathy as Shaggy took a stone and hurled it into the pond before them. It skipped across the water a couple times before eventually sinking and striking something metal.
“Huh?” Spike looked up.
No sooner that it happened, the water began to bubble and glow green before a certain dive emerge from the front of them. Everyone’s eyes widened out of fear.
“Guys…” Spike spoke up. “Who’s that guy again?”
“Captain Cutler’s ghost…” Shaggy whispered, out of fear.
“Uh-oh…” Flurry gulped.
“CAPTAIN CUTLER’S GHOST!!!” Shaggy and Scooby panicked.
“EVERY PONY, RUN!!!” Cadance shouted.
They all turned and fled, following Shaggy and Scooby who were already well ahead. Back in the clubhouse, Fred looked out the window and saw their friends screaming.
“They found us!” Fred warned the others. “Finish that in the van and we'll take it to the Monster Hive.”
“Agreed!” Twilight nodded.
They soon rushed into the Mystery Machine and rode off as Captain Cutler’s ghost emerged from the water to capture them. The ghost brought out his crossbow and began to shoot it. The harpoon it the doors, but fortunately not the passengers inside. The metal man used all his strength to pull the van towards him, much to everyone’s horror.
“What will we do? What’ll we do?” Pinkie asked frantically. “What ARE we going to do?!”
“Fine, let’s go back!” Fred declared.
He started to back up the van, something even Captain Cutler didn’t see coming.
“Uh, Fred? We’re trying not to die here!” Rainbow told him.
“Trust me!” Fred called out.
Quickly backing the van, he struck Captain Cutler and sent him flying straight back into the pond.
“Nice!” Rainbow smirked. “I’d have personally given ole tin can a good dent with my bare hooves… but still nice.”
“Told ya,” Fred replied. “Hang on!”
Fred proceeded to shift the gears to drive and pressed onward. All the while Velma used a screwdriver to work on the device.
“Shaggy, give me a hand!” Velma cried out.
“This is tied for the most terrifying day of my life,” Shaggy spoke frightened.
“What day could ‘this’ possibly be tied for?” Rarity panicked.
“Every other freaking day of my life!” Shaggy cried.
“Thanks goodness,” Fluttershy sighed with relief.
The gang zoomed through town at top speed before the sight of a familiar flying monster caught their attention. The Pterodactyl Ghost flying over them, the ghost dinosaur’s wings flapping greatly.
“We’ve got company!” Scrappy told them.
“Tweety’s back!” Velma shrieked.
“Doesn’t that thing ever take a break?” Shining asked.
“Shaggy?!” Fred called out.
“Yeah?!” Shaggy called back.
“I’m putting her in cruise,” Fred told him. “Take the wheel!”
Shaggy soon went to take the wheel. The Pterodactyl Ghost snarled and grabbed hold of the back of the Mystery Machine, shattering some windows. This made everybody flip upside down and quickly Shaggy grabbed hold of the wheel. Fred kicked the back doors open and aimed a flamethrower at the flying dinosaur.
“Take THIS!” Fred shouted.
He shot some flames toward the monster, barely singing it.
“That should scare it,” Applejack smirked.
Instead, the Pterodactyl Ghost grabbed the flamethrower and broke it between its talons.
“Or not…” Pinkie said nervously.
“This is bad,” Fred frowned.
“No doubt,” Shaggy agreed, beside him.
Everyone quickly looked at Shaggy before a sudden realization occurred.
“Shaggy, who’s driving?” Spike asked.
Everyone faced the front seat and spotted Scooby Doo sitting in the passenger seat, looking at them with no one else behind the wheel.
“Rello!” Scooby waved.
“We’re dead,” Rainbow sighed.
“Very, very dead…” Shining nodded.
The Pterodactyl Ghost grabbed the interior carpet of the Mystery Machine in its talons and yanked the entire gang out of the back. Soon they were all screaming, hanging on for dear life as the ghost tried snapping at them with the van pulling them behind it. Fluttershy squeaked in fear as she tried in vain to kick the snapping monster with her hind hooves. That’s when Rainbow Dash flew in for the save.
“Hey bird brain!” She yelled. “Pick on some pony your own size!”
Rainbow jumped onto the monster’s back and bashed its head with lefts and rights. The monster screeched as it tried to fight Rainbow off. Using whatever mobility they had, Shining Armor, Twilight Sparkle, Cadance, and Rarity used their magic to shoot the Pterodactyl Ghost. Unfortunately, they missed every shot.
“Try to keep it steady, Rainbow!” Twilight yelled.
“Gee, why didn’t I think of that?!” Rainbow yelled back.
Finally, the Pterodactyl managed to shake Rainbow off. She crashed right into the rest of the gang, her eyes rolled, and tiny Pterodactyls flew around her head. The monster swooped down again and made to finish them off. That is… until another flying object crashed into it. Everyone looked up in shock and amazement as the strange black creature with red glowing eyes they’d seen previously now in a mid-air battle with the Pterodactyl Ghost.
“Isn’t that the monster you saw Fluttershy?” Cadance asked.
“Fluttershy merely nodded in response.
“But why is it helping us?” Shining questioned.
“How about we don’t question it fer now and focus on getting back in the van!” Applejack yelled.
With the winged beasts battling it out in the sky, the gang tried to hull themselves back into the Mystery Machine. As they did, they could see through the windshield another frightening sight. A big rig truck driven by the Zombie at full speed toward them.
“Scooby, turn the wheel!” Velma said urgently.
“Reel?” Scooby asked himself.
Scooby quickly shuffled over the driver seat and looked at the wheel. Reaching out with his paw, all he managed to do was honk the horn and cover his eyes in fear. The Mystery Machine and the truck continued to barrel toward one another.
“SCOOBY!” Everyone screamed.
“Oh, let me!” Scrappy yelled.
The pup quickly leapt over the rest of the gang toward the front of his uncle. Grabbing the steering wheel, he veered a hard right. The Zombie noticed this and also turned the truck hoping to crash into them. However, the Mystery Machine managed to slide by the truck and made it through to the other side. Everyone finally managed to climb back into the van, as the Pterodactyl Ghost and the other monster battled behind.
The two flying monsters tackled one another trying to severely damage each other. The dark beast shrieked in pain as the Pterodactyl snapped its sharp teeth on one of its arms, but the monster reeled back and swiped the Pterodactyl in the eye with its sharp claws. The Pterodactyl screeched as it shoved the other winged monster off itself and soared down towards the Mystery Machine once more.
Just as it was about to snap at them again, the dark winged beast crashed into it again and sunk its fangs into the Pterodactyl’s back. It then overpowered the prehistoric predator with its own wings and steered it off course till it finally crashed into a billboard and got itself stuck.
Every in the Mystery Machine cheered as they saw the Pterodactyl Ghost trapped in the billboard as the dark creature took off into the sky. Twilight looked over toward Fluttershy and was met with surprise. The usually shy Pegasus didn’t cower in fear; instead, she stared after the beast in fascination.
“Something on your mind Fluttershy?” She asked.
“I just don’t understand,” Fluttershy spoke confused. “Whenever we’ve seen this creature before, it filled us with terror and other bad feelings. But now… it comes out of nowhere and helped us.”
“Yeah, kind of threw me off too,” Twilight nodded in agreement.
Fluttershy cocked her head off the side as thoughts raced through her head. Every the creature had been seen, it usually preceded some sort of tragedy or disaster. Almost as though it served as a prophet warning of destruction. Maybe it never intended to cause harm, but merely warned them of bad things to come. And now it just saved them from the Pterodactyl Ghost, which only led to one question on her mind…
“Why?” She thought.
That was so sweet
There's a moment to reflect in life, the good and the bad. On one hand, the Mystery Inc. gang get to reflect on their childhood when mystery solving was not expected from everyone and despite all the dangers they did it mainly for fun. But then comes the moments of reflection... tensions still stem between Flurry and her father, the latter she feels holds no confidence in her abilities after what occurred hours earlier. Course, even Shaggy and his own friends feel down-hearted that all their efforts to be detectives like their friends only made them worse. We talk of self-esteem issues, nothing compares with Spike and no matter what he does he still feels like something is weighing him down from his potential.
But still... least they now have a plan in store that can hopefully save the town and fix everything. And yet there's still a growing question: If the Mothman is a symbol of bad things to come, why save the Equestrians and their friends from the Pterodactyl Ghost? Did the Mothman truly mean to save them? Did he wanted the ponies for himself? Or is it because... it knows this is not where their story ends?
No you're not stupid. You're really the most insensitive pony in Equestria. First with Twilight, then to Spike, then Thorax, and now this.
Seriously what the heck did Chrysalis even see in that guy.
But all and all great chapter. I really like Cadance bonding with Flurry Heart.
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Same here. It was a nice mother and daughter moment they had together which I found sweet and heartwarming
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Indeed. This is why moms are the best.
About time somepony told Shining off
Man, this chapter had everything!
Action, drama, heartfelt bonding and an appearance by The Mothman.
What in the world will happen next!?
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Ok. I’m back on a lunch break.
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What a coincidence. I'm five minutes away from my own lunch break.
Wait a minute. You...already update...while I had lunch?
Excuse me.
*Walks out the door and screams*
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Not to worry. I’ve done this, plenty of time before. I can do it again, after my shift is over.
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Just take a deep breath Phantom buddy. Like we've said before don't go stressing yourself over the commentaries.
Shining you just openly told Flurry she's still a helpless little filly, and now you're still condescending her? Low blow. At least Cadence is there to give Flurry the pick me up she deserves. But it looks like whatever's been following Fluttershy may not be as bad as she thought.
I see when Shining finally talks to Flurry about his behavior towards her, she still acts stand offish.
Shining Armor: Flurry?
Flurry: What do you want, dad? Come to grill me again? You've been doing that a lot in these last hours.
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Precisely, being an insensitive like her (at least, in those moments you mentioned).
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You too, you have already uploaded two chapters in one day, and they are not exactly short (although we appreciate that you did it).
Although Scooby Doo and the rest of Mystery Inc. usually make us laugh, we forget that they are flawed people who don't always do well, either as a team or on a personal level. Fred, for example, used to see solving mysteries as exciting and fun work to do with his friends, but now it seems like he sees his work as a burden more.
I can understand how Shinning Armor felt, it is normal for me to be angry if your daughter lies to you and puts herself in a dangerous situation; But she has said the least opportune at the worst moment (as if what she said earlier wasn't discouraging enough), so it's normal for Flurry to get like that. Good thing Cadence is there for her, the heart to heart mother-daughter conversation is very well developed, it is natural and emotionally deep. Now we know that Flurry wanted to show her worth not only by not wanting to become the typical "daddy's princess", but because she admires her parents and her aunt; And like most minors, he idolizes them by seeing them as perfect people (or ponies, in this case) for whom everything turns out well, ignoring that it is not, because as Cadence points out, even the princess of love has arguments with her husband. It's those mistakes you make along the way that give you the experience you need to keep going, and Cadence has passed it on very well to her daughter.
Flurry believed that she was the one who felt the worst in this situation, but she was wrong: Shaggy and Scooby Doo are so affected and full of shame by their gaffes that they do not dare to accompany their friends. Before they saw themselves as the "funny of the group", but now they see themselves as the clumsy who hinder their friends instead of helping them; and that they will never do anything right (which is not true, as Shaggy played a key role in the defeat of Chrysalis on Spooky Island). On the one hand I understand why Flurry can't cheer them on: They are not like her, Spike or Scrappy; they are already adults, and it seems that they haven't learned anything. But the young princess is right that even grow people screw up the situation from time to time (as a certain white blue-haired unicorn whose name I will not mention has now done).
I found it very cute to imagine Flurry hugging Scooby. You can see that the two have a special connection
But with this gang, the calm does not last long, and less if there are monsters on the loose. A chase ensues in which the Pterodactyl Ghost returns, and where Scooby (unlike when they escaped from the possessed teenagers on the island) proves to be a poor driver. Good thing Scrappy was there ... and it's not the only one. The Mothman also reappears, but this time he intervenes, and he does so to save the protagonists. Maybe he wasn't a bad monster after all... or does it have something in mind, and it needs the ponies alive? At this point, I'm the same or more confused than at the beginning. As Fluttershy says, Why?
The good thing about all this is that it seems that they still trust Shaggy and Scooby, since they let the former lead at the beginning of the chase; and they already know what to do to destroy the monsters. But the villains know that they know it, so I hope Mystery Inc and The ponies (and dragon) are prepared.
Keep that up, and you'll join the same fate of Hungry Hero and the others....
Ok. I'm back.
hmm 🤔 this jusr got a whole intresting why did the mothman save our heros it’s truly vexing (ooh haven’t use that word in a while ) this mystery of mothman is giving us more questions than answers
Why, indeed.....??
Meanwhile, back at Discord's Theater(s)
Me: (To the narrators) "You guys are making things way too close to home now."
Galaxy
C3PO: "I say! What a rude human."
Galen Marek: (To Sunset) "See. This is why we have speeders."
Equestria Girls
EqG Fluttershy: (Terrified) "Oh those poor people." (Bugs Bunny holds her close for comfort)
Porky Pig: "Oh d-d-d-dear."
Galaxy
Sunset Shimmer: (Experiences a PTSD flashback of the Death Star destroying Alderaan) "Noooo...." (Galen Marek hugs her for comfort, with Ray licking his tongue across Sunset's cheek)
All Theaters
Audience: "PINKIE!"
EqG Pinkie Pie: (Annoyed) "ME!"
All Theaters
The Audience: "EW!"
Han Solo: "I think I'm going to be sick, myself..."
Random Crystal Pony: "Oh! I don't even WANT to think..."
Future G5
Sunny Starscout: "So that's what happened? Is that how...the magic of friendship...died?"
Pipsqueak: (To me) "Uh...Excuse me. Mr. PhD Dragon Doctor? What's going to happen to our friend? What can we do?"
Me: "Hope for a miracle, Pip. That's all any of us can do, right now..."
Equestria Girls
EqG Fluttershy broke down, crying into Bugs Bunny chest, which the rabbit held her close.
Bugs Bunny: "There, there, Flutters. Everything will be okay. Okay?"
Sugarcoat: "The city is being overrun by monsters, our friends are being backed up in a corner, so..." (Sees Bugs Bunny shooting a glare at her) "...I mean...Sure, listen to the rabbit."
Galaxy
Sunset Shimmer: "Twilight..." (Looks down at the floor and clenched her fist)
Galen Marek: (Calmly stroke Sunset's back) "...May the Force be with them..."
Sunset Shimmer: (Looks up at Galen, then down at Ray, on her hands) "I wish I could help..."
Future G5
Izzy Moonbow: "Oh no...Sunny? You don't think...this could be the end of..."
Sunny Starscout: (Shakes her head) "No...I...I don't know...but..."
Sheriff Hitch: "Whatever happened, it's all in the past now, Sunny."
Sunny Starscout: "I know, but...still...I wish..."
Airplanes – B.O.B ft. Hayley Williams
Sunny Starscout: (Singing)
Can we pretend that airplanes in the night sky are like shootin' stars
I could really use a wish right now, wish right now, wish right now
Can we pretend that airplanes in the night sky are like shootin' stars
I could really use a wish right now, wish right now, wish right now
Me, Snips, Snails, and Porky Pig: (Rapping)
Yeah, I could use a dream or a genie or a wish
To go back to a place much simpler than this
'Cause after all the partyin' and smashin' and crashin'
And all the glitz and glam and the fashion
And all the pandemonium and all the madness
There comes a time where you fade to the blackness
And when you're starin' at the phone in your lap
And you hopin' but them people never call you back
But that's just how the story unfolds
You get another hand soon after you fold
And when your plans unravel in the sand
What would you wish for, if you had one chance?
So airplane, airplane sorry I'm late
I'm on my way so don't close that gate
If I don't make that, then I'll switch my flight
And I'll be right back at it by the end of the night
Sunset Shimmer and Sunny Starscout: (Singing)
Can we pretend that airplanes (spaceships) in the night sky are like shootin' stars
Me and the boys: (singing)
Shooting stars...
Sunset Shimmer and Sunny Starscout: (Singing)
I could really use a–
Together:
–wish right now, wish right now, wish right now
Sunset Shimmer and Sunny Starscout: (Singing)
Can we pretend that airplanes(spaceships) in the night sky are like shootin' stars
Me and the boys: (Singing)
Shooting stars
Sunset Shimmer and Sunny Starscout: (Singing)
I could really use a–
Together: (Singing)
–wish right now, wish right now, wish right now
Me: (Rapping)
Yeah, yeah, somebody take me back to the days
Before this was a job, before I got paid
Before it ever mattered what I had in my bank
Yeah, back when I was tryna get a tip at Subway
Snips: (Rapping)
And back then I was rappin' for the hell of it
Snails: (Rapping)
But nowadays we rappin' to stay relevant
I'm guessin' that if we can make some wishes out of airplanes
Me, Snips, and Snails:
Then maybe, oh maybe, I'll go back to the days
Porky Pig: (Rapping)
Before the politics that we call the rap game
And back when ain't nobody listened to my mixtape
And back before when I tried to cover up my slang
But this is for Decatur, what's up Bobby Ray?
Me, Snips, Snails, and Porky Pig:
So can I get a wish to end the politics?
And get back to the music that started this shit
So here I stand and then again I say
I'm hoping we can make some wishes out of airplanes
Sunset Shimmer and Sunny Starscout: (Singing)
Can we pretend that airplanes in the night sky are like shootin' stars
Me and the boys: (Singing)
Shooting stars
Sunset Shimmer and Sunny Starscout: (Singing)
I could really use a–
Together:
–wish right now, wish right now, wish right now
Sunset Shimmer and Sunny Starscout: (Singing)
Can we pretend that airplanes in the night sky are like shootin' stars
Me and the boys: (Singing)
Shooting stars
Sunset Shimmer and Sunny Starscout: (Singing)
I could really use a–
Together:
–wish right now, wish right now, wish right now
Me: (Rapping)
I could really use a wish right now
Sunset Shimmer and Sunny Starscout: (Vocalizing for the rest of the verse)
Porky Pig: (Rapping)
I, I, I could really use a wish right now
Me and Porky Pig: (Rapping)
Like, like, like shootin' stars
Me, Porky Pig, Snips, and Snails:
I, I, I could, I could really use a wish right now
A wish, a wish right now
Next>>
That was an intense and awesome chapter, I esp. loved how the mothman came in and helped. The only question is WHY? He gets more mysterious every time.
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Equestria Girls
Bugs Bunny: "Open mouth, insert foot."
Daffy Duck: "Ew! Don't tell me you're one of thos-th-e weird people who'sth into that sthuff."
Mudbriar: "Technically. Scooby and Shaggy did most of the work."
Audience: "MUDBRIAR!"
Crazy Steve: (To Mudbriar) "YOU SHUT UP!"
I simply shook my head in sympathy, as me and the audience watch the scene unfolds.
Galaxy
Sunset Shimmer stared intently at the picture, feeling the Force calling her towards it. Clutching her geode, she held her hand out, closed her eyes, concentrating the Force's Echo, and saw the memory playing in her mind.
Flashback
Sunset Shimmer couldn't help but shed tears of joy and sympathy. The memory reminded her of her golden days, with her friends, back in the Equestria World.
Sunset Shimmer: "I wonder how my friends are doing, back home..."
Equestria Girls
EqG Applejack: "Or us."
Future G5
Sunny Starscout: "Ditto."
Me: (Rolling my eyes) "Here comes the annoying concern daddy spiel..."
Ember: (After she was freed from her restraints) "Ugh! He sounds just like my dad."
Me: (Shaking my head) "You near-sighted, half-witted, pea-brain stallion. You just find it easier to believe what you see in front of you, instead of looking past and seeing the potential it could have in the future, or even taking the time to listen to someone else's opinion! It's the Royal Canterlot Wedding all over again!"
All Theaters
The Audience san the smart ones: "Oooooooh!!!"
Princess Celestia: (Hypnotized again) "Ba-CAWK!"
Storm Shield: (Annoyed) "Not again..."
Mark Provart - Monsters [Clean]
Ember: "I'm with you there, little pony..."
Me: "AND your mother(Princess Cadence) is bad luck, with a just a single evil glare."
Me: "Which is what makes her a Girl Worth Fighting for for...well, Captain Shining Armor. Every queens and princesses need a knight in shining armor to fight for them."
Autumn Blaze: (To me) "Or even a samurai?"
Me: "Yup."
Rain Shine: "Hmmm...I think you in a samurai armor would be...beguiling." (I couldn't help but blush at Rain Shine's comment)
Equestria Girls
Vignette Valencia: "Yikes. That bad, huh?"
Sugarcoat: "Sounds crude. But effective."
Indigo Zap: "Oh, what the heck. A win's a win, right?"
Equestria Girls
Now Bugs Bunny couldn't help but feel, a little guilty, along with Porky Pig, for Scrappy.
Me: "Yeah. Poor guy."
Me: "IT'S TERROR TIME AGAIN!"
Button Mash: "That's WAY too close for comfort!"
Grubber: "Don't have to tell me twice!"
Gilda: "Huh. Hallelujah!"
Equestria Girls
Bugs Bunny: "And he's OUT!"
Extra Cut
Velma: "It's done!"
All Theaters
The Audience: "YAY!"
Equestria Girls
Porky Pig: "And n-n-n-n-not the little yellow ca-ca-ca-bird we all know and love!"
Capper Dapperpaw: "USE THE DRAGON!"
Galaxy
Sunset Shimmer: "Shaggy?"
Galen Marek: "What are you–"
Galaxy
Han Solo: "STOP GAWKING YOU IDIOT! DRIVE!"
Gilda: "YEAH! Kick his ass, Rainbow! Yeah, YEAH!"
Gabby: "Gilda! There are kids in the theaters! And some of them are donkeys!" (Points to young donkeys crying)
Trixie: "Maybe your aiming is off!"
Me: "WHAT–"
Equestria Girls
Bugs Bunny: "The–"
Galaxy & Future G5
Sunset Shimmer & Sunny Starscout: "WHAAAAAAAAAAAAT?!"
Me: "Wow! I don't believe this. I can't believe this! Mothman...fighting...the Pterodactyl Ghost? What's next, the Jersey Devil fighting Bigfoot? Loch Ness Monster eating Jaws?"
Random Dude: "What about the time when Man-Bat saved you from the Riddler and Scarecrow from turning you INTO a Jersey Devil?"
Me: "Don't remind me..."
Equestria Girls
Daffy Duck: "What are you doing, you stupid dog? Drive, DRIVE!" (Almost hits Sour Sweet)
Sour Sweet: (Angrily) "My nachos!"
Galaxy
Sunset Shimmer/u]: (Sighs in relief) "Phew! That was a close one."
Extra Cut
Nearby, Buried Lede was walking down the street, talking to himself, on what to post on his next headline.
Buried Lede: "Deluded! Nah, too strong...Moronic! No...too soft... They are deranged, unhinged, and–"
Extra Cut
Buried Lede: (Startled by the commotion) "OH!"
Pinkie Pie: (From inside the Mystery Machine) "Hey, Mr. Lede! Nice mustache!"
And as an added insult to injury, the billboard has a picture of a baby, with a speech bubble that reads: "I am a party pooper!"
Buried Lede was just walking down the streets, looking for his missing reporters, Juniper and Wallflower, when he saw the pterodactyl ghost in the billboard, and Mothman flying away.
Buried Lede: "MENACE! A FECKLESS, TREACHEROUS, UNHINGED, DANGEROUS MENACE! Juniper! They were right here! THEY ALMOST RUN ME OVER, WITH THEIR PTERODACTYL GHOST AND MOTHMAN WAS IN ON IT!" (Remembers he's all alone) "Argh! Where are those girls when I need them?"
Just in time! All commentaries up. Now, as for me...
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Wow that last part was awesome keep up the good work
Wish I was in the next chapter, my runescape character form would have come in handing against the black knight ghost.
Mothman helped them? OK, definitely didn't expect that. Question is, why?
The only thing I can say for sure about Mothman is that since it's traveled between the worlds of Star Wars, Scoody Doo, and Equestria, he can't be a guy in a mask.
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who says is a he, it could very well be a she.
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See some implication that the Looney Tunes will be hanging around for a while elsewhere. With the post from the last chapter I also kind of realize none of the Mane 6 are playing singles anymore relationship-wise.
Now that I think of it this movie has more callbacks to Pup Named Scooby-Doo then I realized. I have to wonder what Fred thinks of his old Daily Exaggerator phase and if Jenkins still works with the Blake family at all.
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oh man if jenkin return i’m so gonna use this
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Fair point. Though, the name "Mothman" has some implications.
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well, until the true about this mothman's secret is revealed, lets be quiet about it, cuz I don't start a long talk about it.
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Good idea. Things are crazy enough with the monster rampage and royal family drama, we don't need to add cryptid gender debate to the list.
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agreed, all answers will come at the end of the story.
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idk i have a feeling we might get more questions than answers when this story is over i hope i’m wrong
Happy Thanksgiving
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Me:( talking on the headset)" Ok, take your time on getting here and good luck,"(takes the headset off and pulls out the walkie talkie)" Hey Phantom Dragon, if you can hear me, ever answer your walkie talkie or come to the radar room, need to have a word with ya, over and out".
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Why do I get the feeling the horse the Black Knight rides will end up being Sombra?
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you are not the only one man
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and Shining Armor will join Fred in the joust?
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we'll have to wait and see.
11062394
Exactly what I was thinking
Next Stop, Back to the Hive!
I love your story.