If I am honest, that is a damn good first chapter. Good pacing, no spelling errors as far as I saw, and is engaging. It reminded me of german literature. I wish you good luck with the story.
Very good first chapter, I would personally chose the middle option as it allows a greater degree of freedom than the other two. The first is too obvious, and while being powerful is interesting it is also dangerous to be hunted. The third is arguably the worst, to be created means someone knows who you are. That person likely has the money or influence to keep you under their thumb or send people out to kill you if you become too dangerous.
If I am honest, that is a damn good first chapter. Good pacing, no spelling errors as far as I saw, and is engaging. It reminded me of german literature. I wish you good luck with the story.
good start. hope to see more
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Thank you
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I'll try
Which would you choose and why
Sincerely a curious joker đ
Very good first chapter, I would personally chose the middle option as it allows a greater degree of freedom than the other two. The first is too obvious, and while being powerful is interesting it is also dangerous to be hunted. The third is arguably the worst, to be created means someone knows who you are. That person likely has the money or influence to keep you under their thumb or send people out to kill you if you become too dangerous.
This is a very intriguing idea you've started, I'll be watching.
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I hope you mean the story
nervous chuckle
nervous coughing
Not me right? (;ÅīšÅ)
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I mean primarily the story but maybe I'll keep an eye on you in my spare time, I haven't decided yet
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looks around
Aha I'm on the run you'll never find me now!!
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party time