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Originally my entries to the Duelist of Canterlot High, an alternate versions of DrakeyC's Yugioh series.

What follows is an anthology of duels between different students with the halls of Canterlot High. How Applejack got her predaplat deck. Rarity dueling Moondancer for the first time. Applejack...dueling again. If there are more demands in the future, I might continue to do shorts using characters and decks from both mine and DrakeyC's.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 10 )

Did Hunter’s brother died or something?

Yaay more yugioh content

Edit- forgot star chasers deck. The fact he did that to so many good cards kills me on the inside.

Spoilers to those that have not read it. ↓

That was an actually very nice read, quite engaging and made me flip through until the very end. You got me to care about Star Hunter with his rather sad backstory without overdoing the "sad" part of it. Moondancer was a joy to have, and the romance bits between her and Star Hunter was adorable. Applejack was amazing as always.

Emotions were handled wonderfully, and the POV switching didn't catch me off guard quite as much. Star Chaser is without a doubt an absolute manchild that I think we all met at some point in time, but that's due to the fact for the way he's raised. Nice job making a quality jerk that has a good reason for being a jerk. His POV was full a cringe, in a good way. And oh, how satisfying it was it to see him get destroyed by Applejack in the next chapter, which was definitely my favourite one. Looks AJ also tapped into her Element unconsciously.

I suggest that you change the rating to Teen though since there are mild swears that are definitely not "E for Everyone" and that part with Star Chaser's rather sexual thinking about AJ if ya know what I mean. I really hope there's more to this.

I've seen this in Night-Quill's account, but I've heard that he canceled it, and I was just working on my own submission, sadly. But I digress. I truly enjoyed these chapters from his story and I'm glad that if and when he deletes that story, it won't flat out disappear now. I would personally enjoy a continuation of this, to see more of Star Hunter and his life, especially with Moondancer (truthfully, I'm a sucker for romance), plus I would like to know who the aunt, Star Chart is and what exactly happened to Hunter and Chaser's parents after the house got cleared out. But don't worry, I'm not going to demand that you write it, it's your choice, and if you do make a continuation, work on it at your own pace, I'm behind on my own stories and couldn't find time to write, especially with people asking "when's the next chapter?" I can see why many authors here find it annoying.

Anyways, better wrap this up before I go on a tangent. All in all, this was an awesome read and hope many Equestria Girls/Yu-Gi-Oh enthusiasts think so as well.

Have a good one! :twilightsmile:

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Well my other Yugioh story is sort of continuing these stories. I also have planned a final showdown between the brothers as well as introducing Star Chart

Jesus christ, what a gut punch

Also, love the shaddoll archetype

Wasn’t expecting the Jars of Clay right there in the end, but cool.

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