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Time for a stakeout!
Ugh, this chapter is a mess. I'd recommend to split it in two and combine with the previous one or drop the part which describes the events from the previous chapter and add more details on how this mage got a new home. Right now it looks like he's standing in front of the main character, his mind goes on a few tangents for a few paragraphs, but he kinda still standing right there in front of him just thinking all that and then suddenly naughty Miia decides to play on his meat flute and then they are naked in the bed in his new home and hobgoblin knocking on the door. That's weird. It's obvious that the bed scene happens at his new home, but only after reading part of it in disbelief of whatever is going on.