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noice
Now there’s some more good quality original content. Good job
That's an interesting deviation from the Overlord story, nice.
Just some criticism: you should make a break when the PoV changes back to Mannulus. As it is we were in Solar's PoV one paragraph then suddenly Mannulus in the next one, it was quite confusing.
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Thanks, and I did make the break, after I submitted the chapter. Neither L0RD0F7HUNDER or myself caught it until it was submitted. At which time I went in and showed the change of view.
Nice