Confound these ponies. They drive me to write.
After the humiliating defeat at Canterlot, Queen Chrysalis is thirsty for revenge. What better way to satisfy herself than with another one? But before she can even hope to take over Equestria, she's going to need someone to scout the area beforehoof. She sends out a small group of faithful changelings, which includes the accident-prone Scout Number One-Five-Nine, to check out the nearby settlement of Appleloosa. What could possibly go wrong?
A sequel to A Change in Luck.
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Again, really good. But, Please Watch out, it`s easy to lose overview with 14 Changeling names.
I´m sure you will make it good.
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(my face by reading this
Don't worry. At most, you'll only have to know five changelings in this story. I have a feeling it would be hard for both me and a reader to keep up with 14 numbers as names and personalities to go with them. I plan to just refer to the Interlopers as either "the nymphs" or "the Interlopers."
Thanks for the support, I'll try my best to make this story worth everyone's time.
okaaaay... Jedi changelings...
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I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!
WOOOOW! next chapter, next 10 minutes of uncontrollably giggling.
NEED MORE
Interesting, so the new class is basically pod people.
Dammit, 159,you just had to hurt Chryssie.
Two mistakes I noticed:
to the pony of 'Appleloosa,' - missing town or settlement
At the end of the order, Chrysalis' horn faded away - you probably meant that the glow around her horn faded away, not the horn itself.
Noooo, poor drone!