Udders that were so pale her veins were visibly slapped and smacked under his brutal thrusts while the dog mounted her, driving his hips with such force her buttocks wobbled and she was nearly tipped forward each time he speared her.

This is such a bizarre sentence

There's a typo in the long description, too. I just. This feels so lazy and shoddy. This chapter isn't that long--did you seriously not have time to proofread it?

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Didn't notice the typo in the description until just now, thanks. I don't know whether it's due to my dyslexia but I actually don't tend to recognize errors like this until attention is drawn to them; it's like my brain has an autocorrect feature.

I probably need an editor but I've always hesitated to ask.

You should put the link or the number of the images dude, some guys want ot check it out.

Oh look, a fic.
*Read's title*
Wat?

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Don't want to risk another soft ban, think the artist is Aurelius.

Edit: Artist is Audrarius.

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An easy way to effectively proofread any piece of writing is to use a text-to-speech program to read it back to you. Fimfiction has such a system in place that I use myself to check over my writing. It easily catches a ton of errors before I send it to my editor.

It’s weird karma, but karma all the same.

Liiiiiiiiike!

An intelligent beast is a dangerous one!

Spike is coming for the Dazzlings!!!!

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That's a good idea!

nice work

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More to come whenever I find more time to write!