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Zaffy


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A young man, running for his life in his own world of Technology VS Magic, finds a door that leads to Equestria. Transformed into a Unicorn, he must get over his fear of magic, change back to normal, and accidentally accept to save all of Equestria by unknowingly qualifying for the role of 'Hero'.

Author's Note: Sorry to have not posted anything in so long; I've been meaning to stop by for a long while, but never found the time.

I've just come by to say that I'm cancelling this story, or at the very least putting it on hiatus. I kinda tried jumping the gun with this story, and was trying to write it as I went with only a vague general idea of what I wanted to do. I kept bumping into problems and holes in my story and in my ideas, so I'm stopping work on this to work on a different story. I plan to keep the general idea similar, of a human getting dragged into a battle he wasn't meant to fight; however, there are many changes that I want to make to points in the story.

Once again, I'd like to apologize to anyone who's been patiently waiting for some kind of update or sign. I'll keep this story online until I feel comfortable enough to start posting the revised story.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 11 )

>razorboar’s corps
Corpse. Corps is pronounced 'core' and means a particular branch of the armed forces.

It would be much easier to read it you indented the start of a new paragraph and spaced them out with double spaces. I'm not going to go too in-depth since I think I've already reviewed the first chapter... So far so good...

Suddenly, he realized that he had spoken!
(Little tense error. No biggie)

I'm pretty sure I've read this too... So, onwards!
:twilightblush:

>my iPod E.M.P.
So is that like a specialized electromagnetic pulse emitter which only disables iPods? Or is the latest iteration of Apple's music player also a weapon?

I can see it now, the white posters with minimalistic photos of the iPod EMP.
THIS CHANGES EVERYTHING. AGAIN.

(I'm just kidding but the thought made me lol. You need a conjunction or a comma there.)
:pinkiehappy:

ONWARDS!

♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪

this is a really good story i like what's happening so far please write more chapters.

You know that at least theory magic and technology are not on opposite sides? Nice story BTW, will he ever accept that he is a "mage" now? Or he always was but never knew?

♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪

I saw this and thought you have potential with this story I only wish you would continue it

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