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Lorewatcher
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any point hoping for any kind of way he can escape this situation or is he in all sense of the word screwed?
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He'll get out of this specific situation by the next chapter. Now, will the other situations be worse? That's an entirely different question. :)
Damn only discovered 30 minutes ago and this is hot stuffm been wanting to have a good HiE with Sex-Qestria, and even better with compulsions spell on his mind, this is just perfect. Can't wait to see what happen next and if you are in need for art let me know I will try to hammer out a good deal for you. Keep it up
Wow, alright, this one's pretty hot~
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I meant his overall situation of becoming this mare's demented sex toy or whatever plans that the author or whoever commissioned this has for him. I don't want to root for someone whose going to die or lose who they were by the end of the story.
This is amazing and I love every bit of it, thank you for writing and sharing.
Sable is a really fun character, I feel bad for her having to deal with Joel. At least she's making the most of it!
You capture a sense of fantasy really well here, there's a really magical feeling about all the weird stuff she has, and Joel's honest attempts to deal with it.
Very very excited to get to some smut next chapter. <3
I love this it might be my second favorite smut piece ever, but I also feel like it would be more interesting if the Main character had some ways to fight back.
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The actual end point is up in the air. I will say that it gets worse before it gets better.
Talk about cruel and unusual... I love it!
Yes this was very good. You're incredibly creative in terms of bondage and torment scenarios, I'm kinda jealous.
Criticism first, I'm not sure I'm entirely sold on the first person perspective. I enjoy it a ton, and the opportunities it's presenting from a narrative scope. Joel is really really fun to listen to. But when you're going for nuts levels of orgasm denial and spirit breaking, I'm not sure his tone really shifts enough to capture that desperation - which might make things a rougher read, so it's hard to balance, admittedly.
Everything else, though, yessssssss. Sable is so wonderful and generous, being such a helpful teacher here. It's taking a lot of time and effort, but Joel will learn his lesson, and be such a needy happy whore once he's learned a real set of morals and respect for his betters. <3
I especially appreciated the constant reminder of his own arousal from his scent and the feel of his cock, helpless and unable to resist his body's rightful urges. The parts with other ponies were really fun too, taking full advantage of Sable's kind offering without any questions to who or why the poor stallion was available to them.
I'm remembering one of Joel's first thoughts was about a Cindy - personally, I'm hoping for a tearful reunion somewhen down the line, where she can find out how wonderfully Joel has grown in the time he's been missing and they can bond over his experiences!
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Sable ought to be the real Element of Generosity, shouldn't she?
I find it amusing that the author opted to use an image of my OC for the cover art. Not that it's a problem or anything, Just kinda confused how it relates to the story n stuff. xD
might give the story a read just because of this. Depends on if I can muster the patience n stuff to actually sit down and actually read it.
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Tell me if it starts to bother you, I don't want to make you uncomfortable with it. I liked the look of the OC in that artwork and in the next chapter the scenario there happens pretty much exactly as shown.
Do you have an update schedule? I love the plot so far by the way.
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Next chapter should be available within about four days.
It's a good story but it seems a little rushed. A little more detail would help as well. Anyway, keep going.
Not bad for a new Author's first story involving my favorite subject: Transformations. X3
Isn't Joel a boy's name?
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Yes. The main character is male, and still feels more like a man than a mare even after the events of chapter two.
What happened to the whole egg laying thing?
Considering what's happened, there should have been at least one, shouldn't there?
Well this was interesting, I wonder if she will keep her world and if he will actually want to go back after all of this. I wonder if those eggs will eventually spawn some form of tentacle monsters, wonder what they will thing of mommy/daddy once they ache? I wonder if we will see him as a stallion again, I am guessing that they will. Wonder if the changeling will have an interest in him later on?
Wow, this 'Sable' character has no empathy whatsoever. It's no wonder she's out in the middle of nowhere. The saddest part is that Joel could explain to her what he was and where he came from, and she probably wouldn't give a damn except become excited to have something new to expirement on.
How delightfully twisted ~
You gotta feel sorry for the lad. He was abducted, expiremented on, used, and then discarded like yesterday's newspaper. Great story, but I wouldn't wish this fate on my worst enemy.
This can only mean good things
Ol' Joelsette keeps on hopin', but if any gods exist in this world, his/her prayers sure as hell ain't reaching their ears
I'm enjoying this.
For some reason this seems like it's going to break out into an adventure novel at any point, and I really like that.
another day in the life of hapless protang, at least Sable's making sure to spread the torture to others as well.
She at least has her priorities in order for whatever her endgame is.
Once again this was a great chapter I wonder of we will see more of her victims that has gone through TG?
Man, that's hilarious.
Well that sounds ominous. Now I'm picturing a freezer where she keeps stallions in stasis until she has use for them.
Always keeping us at the edge of our seats, I see
Fucking hell, this is some of the kinkiest, most depraved shit I've seen in quite a while. It's like a train wreck, I just can't look away no matter how nuts it gets.
So, uhh, yeah...moar. I guess.
-slowly turned into a blowjob goddes
-made to orgasm when laying eggs
-magically altered to handle large insertions
And now she is being given to a *changeling queen*
Oh yeah.... *It's all coming together*...
Update?
This was one of my favorites back in 2020 (I even re-read some of it from time-to-time), so I'd like to selfishly ask: are you going to continue with it? :'(
Originally I just wanted to have a quick look, but then I had read the entire story instead.
And now I'm very curious what Sable has in store for him.
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Well, they need to feed those 'lings after all.
And rumor says lust fueled by denial is the sweetest one...
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Unfortunately the author had been offline for quite a while (Apr 2nd, 2020 as of today).
It seems like the guy (mare?) in the story isn't the only one who is being kept on the edge. Maybe forever...