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Thesciencefanficwriter


Just your average Elite player.

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This is the story of Julia, the AI assistant of the last clean pilot of a dying human race. For the most part, this will follow her perspective as she tells her story.

She, and her human master are on a mission to restart the human race, when they collide with an asteroid in a small star system. After a bumpy landing, they need to adapt to their new way of living, on a planet full of colorful equines.

Crossover with Elite: Dangerous

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 32 )

Good chapter. Really got me intrested right away....which is the job of a prologue. So good job. Dont really have any suggestions as yet other then you should probably give your stuff at least one more read through before post it. There are a number of typos.....like punctuation and so on. Not that im criticizing bc celestia knows im the last to be critical of someones typing lol. Good luck....ill be following to be sure i get updates as they come out. :pinkiehappy:

Whats the crossover for this? im racking my brain figuring out those ships but I cant place it

Damn good prologue! I'm interested and am definitely looking forward to more of this. Here's a like and a follow!

I really liked this chapter, I do look forward to more
I you got a upvoted and tracking, also what is the crossover? I mean what is this crossover with?

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ah no wonder I couldn't figure it out never played Elite: Dangerous thanks mate

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I googled it and this story is a crossover with a sci-fi video game series called "Elite Dangerous"

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Yeah no, I didn't actually use any ship names from the game. Did you just read my replies?

Statement: You have captured this Unit's interest.
Informative: We shall observe.

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No, i didn’t see your replies until just now. I googled the acronym that is used for the AI and the name of the game series is what came up

Hey author, are the spelling and the period intentional in the title of the first chapter?

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Actually that's my fault, I used the literal definition of first chapter instead of how you named them. My bad.

this has quite a bit of potential, hope to see it continue in the future

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You just reminded me I should probably do that while I have insomnia. I've been trying to start a company, and I'm out of funds, so I'm trying to scrape up what I can. Been just really busy. To top it all off, my current computer's cooler popped open, leaking all over the inside. I had to take the cooler I had set aside for my test bench... So now I need a new cooler for my business stuff.

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Thank you. Unfortunately I have been experiencing writer's block following my application to college, but I will be working on this.

I like where this is going.

I love how this is going. Can't wait to read the reaction to whe they are there.

As soon as I saw the FAS in the thumbnail I knew this was going to be my kinda read.
I require more sustenance!

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Unfortunately I have been very busy all year, but I'm hoping to have the next chapter done by the end of December. Hold on tight.

You know you Could have probably made a whole story with just the process of getting from Earth to the new planet

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Yeah I could. Though I chose not to because this is fimfiction, not fanfiction.net

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