Just a nerd who's ships have formed an armada. I like rare pairs, but the list goes on forever. Hope I can throw out a fic or two you might enjoy. The SunDigo guy.
Their anniversary is coming up and...neither had anything planned. Panic time.
As Rainbow tries to come up with something...she's informed of an offer to perform with her friends. That...would make for an interesting anniversary gift...
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Before I read this, I must know: Why is there a violence tag?
The way i saw the final moment in the fight
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There's a wrestling match involved xD
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Bingo! That's exactly Indigo and Lightning's finish. :D
Kinda saddened that Sunset didn’t give anyone a chair shot. I had hoped there’d be a cheating manager or similar. Lot of fun regardless.
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In a tryout dark match? You're not gonna get that kind of leeway. Though! Who's to say that won't change in the future? xD
Thanks!
and I lost interest on the wrestling match... was hoping for them to be freaking out about their anniversary, not watch them blow it off for wrestling...
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Can't win them all. I thought it'd be a neat twist. Glad you at least gave it a shot.
The problem with the wrestling match is that it's half of the story, and it has zero significance. You could delete the entire fight and the story would still say the same thing.
Also, the summary makes people think it's about The Rainbooms getting a gig, and then they're just slapped with a wrestling match from left field.
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Hmm. That's fair. I just liked the idea and went with it. xD
Can vouch. There's a Malaysian boy named Emman The Kid, started when he was 14.
The two songs that I Immediately thought of, were Tyson Kidd's "Bed Of Nails" theme, and You Make Me Sick by Egypt Central
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I'm fairly sure a lot of luchadors did also. I think...maybe Rey started young too? Could just have that mixed up.
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I was going for the Undisputed Era theme. I think for being so bad at describing music that it was pretty accurate.
the wrestling bit was a turn off it comes out of no where with no build up you even spend time talking about how dash is a softie and then bam wrestling match
thats not even how high school wrestling works
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Because its not high school wrestling xD
Its an indie pro wrestling event.
The wrestling match was a little confusing to keep track off, but I enjoyed the story.
I have to agree that the anniversary and the match seem too unconnected, maybe it would've been better if they were two separate stories but I enjoyed the interactions in both so it gets a pass from me.
I also really enjoy fights, and this one was fun.
Rainbow and Indigo's talk about Sunset was the best part of the chapter.
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I appreciate the read and critique. I'll work them out better in the future. Might even actually rewrite this someday. Who knows. I like the dynamic between Indigo, Dash and Light.
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Sometimes a rewrite is good with a new perspective if it leaves you happier with the story. Good luck!
When you put it that way, it makes Sunset's flight like a act of teenage rebellion, wonder if that crossed the creator's mind.
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I don't exactly want to marry myself to the idea and have that as the sole reason, but I do enjoy that viewpoint on it. So, I figure if that's what Indigo sees it as, it's a good way to get across the concept as believable within the story, though not exactly saying that's the definitive reason, y'know? Thanks for reading! :D