Moondancer has...had a secret, but when it's revealed for the school to know...she's met with more support than ever. The quiet nerd gains a group of die hard friends and...with no prior knowledge of friendship, she begins trying to take turns to learn more about them...from the DJ's music, to the overenthusiastic 'Cryptozoologist' as she likes to call herself, the confectioner, the reserved socialite and even the cheerful delivery girl. Though none seem to hold her interest as much as the girl who stood up for her first. The rough and tumble jock.
Join her on her journey from being an outcast to having so many friends she isn't sure how she'll manage...and maybe, just maybe...she'll let Light know just how much she appreciated her stepping in when that bully decided to pick on her.
*Note* Dancing may or may not happen.
Profanity and Violence aren't the focus...but there are instances where fists are thrown and some heavy topics are discussed. The suicide warning is for a big reveal, but no worries, none of the cast are the victims.
And then I ship Lightning and Moondancer..... Lol great story btw
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Aha! I got one! My plan is already coming together!
Thank you for reading :D
Hrmmm... interesting, let's see where this goes!
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Thanks for giving it a chance!
I'm really liking the start of this story I can't wait to read more
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Oh, thank you so much! I'm glad there are a couple people interested already.
Love this story already! I love how it's the perspective of the second set of seven girls!
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Thank you so much! I'm glad I could put that across. I'd like to think that just because I'm following a different group, doesn't mean that stuff just stops involving the rainbooms. They're kinda magnets for stuff like that
Ahhh I love this, such underutilized characters. I can't wait to read the next chapter
also you added my love so you are forever loved by me
Ahhhh I love this sooooo cute!!!
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I love writing for underused characters. Its fun to poke into their minds and give them personalities and quirks that you'd never expect...but somehow makes sense! :D
Thank you so much!
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Its the little things that keep me wanting to write this. I was nervous no one would dig it. Thanks for the support, it really makes me want to do more.
Really enjoying this so far
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Thank you so much, I actually finished the epilogue of this yesterday, so I made sure I wouldnt leave it on incomplete.
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Excellent. Can't wait to read it
1. Loved the Discord name change to Chaos.
2. SQUEEEE! FFXIV! And Octavia and Moonie fangasming over the fight against Zenos at the end of Stormblood <3.
Loved this chapter.
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I'm so glad you liked it! And I actually have plans to poke more into FFXIV...The Zenos fight was brand new when I wrote this, so I tried to be vague. xD
This is a nice start, I like the current cast and this is the first time I see some kind of antagonist, so I'm curios of how you will handle it.
PS: I'm sensing some patters, something about tall girls
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It's been a while since I read through this one again. I hope I'm doing alright.
I think it's kinda obvious about the height difference thing.
I really liked this chapter. I love Lyra and Bonbon teasing each other, and Moon dancer being all nervous makes me want to hug her.
I also was surprised with the return of the sirens, and that they are without voice was even more of a surprise.
I like when people don't just let them disappear after rainbow rocks
On the critic side, before the appearance of the trio, the conversation gets a little hard to follow who says what, but just in that instance
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That's fair. At this point they don't have their voices so it's gonna be hard to follow, I guess. Also I love the Dazzlings and I will always try to find a way to cram them into a story.
Vinyl's bit sounded awesome, I fint it very creative of your part, and after seeing Rainbow Rocks is actually believable that something like that exists.
As for the Lightning part, the entity tearing you down everytime you can, I've gone through that (I had three), so I'm curious as to how you handle it.
This is getting very interesting. I'm glad is not just an one-off
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I was refferring at the conversation before they arrive. between Lyra, Moon, Octi and Vinyl
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I really love Lightning Dust as I wrote her, I'm really glad you're enjoying it so far. I like Vinyl's hologram thing. Those gloves come in handy later.
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can't wait to see
This was great. And curiously, even if in some part of the conversations it's not clear who is talking, I already know them well enough that I can recognize their way of talking. Don't know if it's intentional but if it is well done.
Also Roll is great. Funny and kind of pshycotic, and maybe a menace in two ways.
I'm also curious as to how Lightning has gained such a reputation that even confronting what appears to be a taller schoogirl hitman seemes like a fight she can win easily
PS: due to my apparent dislexia, I always read signing like singing, so Vinyl just sings words in my head apparently. (She's secretly a siren!
)
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Light's just an intimidating chick. I kinda had her as someone who used to be a problem child until highschool. Sorta like Lyra's friendship pulled her from the darker side. I haven't really gone into her background fully yet.
Also, Roll is a lot of fun. I wanted her to be kinda off. Like she's there mentally, but doesnt exactly keep up, not through being dumb, just uninterested in trying.
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Yeah, those kind of characters are always interesting to see.
Wow, this chapter was intense.
I totally didn't expect Vinyl's full backstory in her show. It was a great surprise, and you made it feel very emotional, especially at the end when you showed the night before.
AS for the final confrontation, it ceirtanly didn't go as I expected. Roll taking the it for Lightning and their talk in the hospital were very good scenes, even if in the latter the conversation was a little hard to follow. You need to mention a bit more when another character is talking.
I would also have liked that you gave the villain a name, since I got a bit lost as to who it was and what actions she had done along the story.
But other than those issues, I really liked it.
Onto the epilouge
Ohhh, seems I neeed to do some extra reading before tackling this but I'm exited!
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I dunno why, I just never gave her a name. I think I got the idea from a fic with Rainbow having been in an abusive relationship and the abuser was never given a name or gender. I think I was trying to go for something like that.
But thank you! I was really proud of the Vinyl stuff.
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I'm concerned because now it's heading into the magic stuff that I haven't finished writing
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Take your time to prepare it, magic is always complicated XD
If you are unsure of something or want some advice you can send me a message
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Think I'll wait until you're all caught up. Then we can chat about it.
Where were characters like these when sunset was running the school?
God damn. She ain’t gotta worry about nothing.
I would love to hear that.
Looks like lightning dust has some ptsd.
What promise?
What happened to her eye?
Ok, that’s funny.
This is about to get interesting.
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Probably avoiding her to not be picked on next. Unless we're talking about Roll and Lightning? Light is avoiding conflict and Roll is sorta new to the school. I haven't gone into her as much as I want to, yet.
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Ooh, would you believe I actually forgot about that story hook? I'll have to write that one out sometime. Maybe a one-off fic.
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Oh yeah, she's got some history that she doesn't talk about.
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Ah! It took me a minute to remember this bit without rereading everything. It was an unseen conversation Light and Lyra had, implying that Lyra knew about her meltdown and promised not to tell anyone.
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Oh, nothing. It was more of a facepalm like motion.
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Thanks for checking out this fic. I had a lot written for the next part before I got sidetracked into all sorts of other stuff, but! It is all in the same canon, These characters all exist in the same world as my versions of the shadowbolts. I hope when I get them all together that it'll be a fun time. Thanks for reading!
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You’re welcome.