After being invited to the rainbow festival, Rainbow Dash leaves to preform her Sonic Rainboom there. But her friends start to worry when she's away longer than expected.. They go to the town of the Rainbow festival to find her.
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Not bad but feels a little incomplete, we don't see what happened to Jasper, why did he need to use that machine or if maybe she could recover more lately
You clearly are very creative. I do have one slight issue with this story. Not that big, to be honest, but this story probably shouldn't be rated as 'everyone'. It is quite dark. Aside from that, I think you're a great writer and you should definitely keep writing!
Thx for the advice! I'm happy you liked it! ^ ^
It a trap
I have bad feelings
Suspicious
Good thing rainbow dash is ok