Didn't expect Tirek and Cozy Glow to pop up here.
Certainly fitting for Cozy Glow to be Tirek's apprentice in this one.
Makes me wonder if Chrysalis will pop up too and which side would she be on?

Can I ask how tall Flash is?

HA! Secret show reference. LOVE IT!

10216931
KO no, she won’t.

10216949
KO thanks!

10216948
KO 7.2 feet tall.

10216973
Oh,ok then..
By the way, think Chrysalis might appear in any of your stories eventually?

10216976
Thank you.

It's just I couldn't find anything to say Flash was six foot to begin with, nor did the last one give his after transformation height.

so wait. rarity is not a monster??? how is that possible???

I hope Lighting Dust and Flash get back together and make a Harum with the Monster girls.

10216983
KO because it’s my story and she’ll be human in the story, but not in Flash’s harem.

10216999
KO they will!

So... Who's the Invisible corpse in this story?

10217022
KO you’ll see.

Why make this rated M? The basic plot makes it seem like this would work fine without any graphic sex and/or violence.

10217015
I jest hope fluttershy will be ok in this.

VERY good job on the latest chapter. Once again, the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up are all really well done in all the right places. I especially liked Flash's chat with Celestia concerning the origins of Tartarus and the level of secrecy involved, as well as Flash's electrical accidents and the set-up for the main plot in this story. And, yeah, it doesn't surprise me that Rarity is the facility's main designer.

VERY definitely looking forward to more of this.

I'm actually hoping Lightning is part of the harem.

10217765
KO she will.

What's Soarin's problem?