The moment she hit the ground, he woke up, a mild feeling of nausea and dread hit him as he realised the pain from his dream hadn't left him on waking.
"Weird... I'm... sure it's fine." He said, attempting to reassure himself as he headed downstairs and out to look out at the sky and gather his wits. It was strange, the full moon sat still in the sky. It would be beautiful if this strange, overwhelming sense of dread wasn't overpowering his feelings on the subject.
Of course, because every displaced has to be an idiot, didn't watch any movies, read any books and lived under a rock None would be that idiotic to not connect the two together He is already a fictional character and should know that fiction can be real and only an idiot wouldn't use the knowledge from books, movies,internet
10219679 It's called denial. He knows it already, but isn't willing to accept he might be responsible for it.
I'm sorry if the story quality is lacking at the moment. I haven't written much in months but that's more an excuse than anything. More accurately, I'm trying to experiment and get better at showing instead of telling. It's not as easy as I thought though. I'm sorry.
10220224 That’s better than most do in reality. It is better to show than tell. I recommend closing your eyes and imagine how does it play without so much conversation, speak when necessary. For example, do you talk when there is nobody around? And I mean like a monologue. That will help you with conserving what is essential to the story in general.
As one can say words to rally people under your banner but the Same goes for the actions that cares the heart of your people but for all the word that you say they will never speak louder then actions and for what king has done. Can only be fate or destiny to destroy or conquer to be changed to time or to be a free for all eternity. If it is fate let The universe do what they need of the Scarlet king.
🤦♂️ Luna you dumb ass don’t attack people in there dreams I saw this coming well something worse but it happening. Good job on the story please continue this story
According to Tufto's SCP-001 proposal, the King is more akin to a living meme than an individual entity; in effect, he is the idea of nihilism and a force of chaos, and can assimilate an entity thought to be him into an aspect of himself.
Oops-
....Well now that can't be good
You done fucked up.
Of course, because every displaced has to be an idiot, didn't watch any movies, read any books and lived under a rock
None would be that idiotic to not connect the two together
He is already a fictional character and should know that fiction can be real and only an idiot wouldn't use the knowledge from books, movies,internet
She deserved it,next time to the moon
Lol git gud noob
Well.... shiitake mushrooms
Great chapter
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To be honest, I have to agree, I was really hoping this story would be good but it's just been going down hill honestly
Welcome back
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It's called denial. He knows it already, but isn't willing to accept he might be responsible for it.
I'm sorry if the story quality is lacking at the moment. I haven't written much in months but that's more an excuse than anything. More accurately, I'm trying to experiment and get better at showing instead of telling. It's not as easy as I thought though. I'm sorry.
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I still liked the chapter. Good work.
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That’s better than most do in reality. It is better to show than tell. I recommend closing your eyes and imagine how does it play without so much conversation, speak when necessary. For example, do you talk when there is nobody around? And I mean like a monologue. That will help you with conserving what is essential to the story in general.
A very good new chapter, keep it up this is exciting
I thought this was dead, I’m happy it’s back
well fuck
I’ll be watching this story to see how it goes. Good luck.
I mean she deserves it, still hasn't made up for almost killing the entire planet.
As one can say words to rally people under your banner but the Same goes for the actions that cares the heart of your people but for all the word that you say they will never speak louder then actions and for what king has done. Can only be fate or destiny to destroy or conquer to be changed to time or to be a free for all eternity. If it is fate let The universe do what they need of the Scarlet king.
Fair. When you randomly assault strange creatures in their own minds, you get what you get.
Oh boy...
MEGA OOOOOFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF
also can we get some class d bois up in here am i right
HEHEHEHEHEHE
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thank you someone, said it
You killed her dream self, make her fall into a coma. Great job Kingy
🤦♂️ Luna you dumb ass don’t attack people in there dreams I saw this coming well something worse but it happening.
Good job on the story please continue this story
God dammit. Luna
-Villains Wiki - The Scarlet King
So, he could probably eat Discord.
Yooooo imagine if you were in a coma and woke up to 2020
She invades a random guy's dream and acts like an entitled bitch and attacks him for no reason.
She deserved it.
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Plus he does not know that attacing her would put her in a coma. Still tho she is at foult here.
Approval rating 87%
Statistics: good plot,storyline,characters and most grammar +100%, chapters a bit short -10%, I'm tired -1%, cliffhangers -2%
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Facts
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your welcome
Are you going to finish this story
Any news?
So this still alive?
Luna is a fault. He want to talk but she attacked with killing intend.
Great chapter. Hope Luna dont have permanent damage.
O crap... Now i hit the point of waiting...
..... fuck