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Ablegabriel


If I cold begin to be half of what you think of me I could do about anything I could even learn how to love like you.

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nice work i like it:twilightsmile:

um what happen to spike,
and fools story should have been shiny join the army then died at the claw some rouge unloyal ponys/griffins

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Not gonna lie. I completely forgot about spike. Also, when Celestia tells Twilight about Shining, she is going to tell her he died. I might use your idea if you don't mind.

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feel free to, I do hope this twilight end up futa dom take after her new dommy and end up put her future friend under her hoove,

yes...yes...very bueno..very bueno indeed.

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it would be best, given how you dealt with Shining_armor wouldn't want Spike to suffer in this hellish version of equestria.

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that or spike end up twilight butt boi, or huge strong body guard

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I'm gonna wait to bring in spike until after Celestia molds her further into her image and reveals her true form

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I figure or spike get his on mold into something usefull

Welcome back!
Very interesting take on the origin story. Real funny how Celestia just pretends she can't make Twily's parents back to normal. So subtle Tia.

Though I do need to ask, do you have a vendetta against stallions? I mean, you made Starswirl a sexist, Pinkie's dad an abusive dad, and lots of them have become female, including Shining Armor in this story.

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MAybe I do to be perfectly honest. But Shinning isn't a female in this story. He's still a boy, we just changed his name. and his appearance

Are u gonna finish the story?

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what do you mean am I gonna finish it? I just started it?

I mean when you gonna Make the next chapter sorry for the confusion

Very nice (if something so dark can be even called that way :scootangel:) and well thought out twist on the show’s events. Most of it flowed nicely , with some spots being a little too fast for their own good. Also, if I were to nitpick, past tense of the verb ‘pet’ is ‘petted’, not ‘pet’. It’s a regular verb. Also noticed some errors in direct speech, can elaborate more if you’d like me too :twilightsmile:

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Please finshed this story it's so amazing 😍🤩🤩🤗🤗🤗🤩

I can't wait for more of this story I am getting ready to read this again

just finished it again (edit)

well goodbye blueblood, I'll be sure to look for the 'fucked with something that doesn't belong to him' on his tombstone if he's not outright cremated.

And that's why the emergency services says Blueblood’s special when they speak about a brutal enmasculation by chainsaw and multiple magical ways

So I see this going 3 ways for Blueblood.

  1. Murdered
  2. Raped, then Murdered
  3. Turned into a mare then Raped into a broken mess who will whore them-self in the back alleys of Canterlot or Manehattan

Nice work i l look forward to more on this and thank-you misstress:twilightsmile:

I just found out about this chapter but it was worth the wait I love it

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Hey it has been a year and I’m wondering about something? Are you planning another chapter and if not I’m asking if you could make a chapter about Luna and I want celestia to execute Luna for starting a revolution? I hope more comes in the future!

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