Sunny is going to answer for what he's created.
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No. No-no-no-no-no. None of this.
Rant time.
Sunny didn't choose to be a father. Unfaithful, certainly, but he didn't choose to be a father. He chose to risk becoming a father. The secretary, Glider, they chose to have those children. At least Glider knew she was ovulating, she wanted children, and one might suspect something similar with the secretary. If they didn't want single-motherhood, they could have used contraception, abortion, adoptions, etc. Glider can call Sunny pathetic all day long, but she's still the dumbass who chose to screw a married guy, and she will likely blame him for not taking responsibility for her choices. But maybe that's what the gutting of the mother-monster was hinting at? If daddy-long-legs is a metaphor for Sunny (given the daddy-part, I guess a bit obvious in hindsight), the image of it binding of the child to the mother with the rope seems, again, somewhat distorted on the matter of responsibility.
I just want to make clear that I'm not trying to argue against the author, here. They/You might simply be portraying the thoughts of the characters, flawed as they are. I don't know, I just want to bavoid any misunderstanding that I'm somehow offended at you.
In other commentary, it sure is quite Silent Hilly in this story so far. Letters from ex-wives, though not dead. Meaningful paintings. Gratuituous symbolism. Although I can't quite figure out the daddy-long-legs, or why both Sunny and Gilda are running each their respective town - metaphor for family?
Quite brisk tempo on this story, which keeps the interest of the reader, but doesn't quite get across that Silent Hill atmosphere. Could be more slow-paced, sure, but honestly it seems like what the story is trying is done well-enough at this pace so far.
Sure hope Sunny gets out of this with evidence of Rakshasa infestation in his town so he can prove to Gilda that the monsters were actually real.