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saxopony0210


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Things are getting complicated in Ponyville when all of Twilight's close friends' lives have seemed to change for the better. Yet as her friends and family live their dreams, Twilight is left alone. She returns to her favorite foalhood dessert shop to visit an old friend, and realizes that in her case friendship really is magic(....brace yourself for extreme cheesiness...)

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 5 )

May I recommend 'Just Desserts' as a title? :twilightsmile:

Also, that was damn good!

I almost never see Twi/Joe pairings! :pinkiehappy:
Actually, come to think of it ... This is only the second one I've read on FIMfics.
FYI? You should totally write a sequel for this.

Very touching and well written. Pinkie approves. :pinkiehappy:

:moustache::raritywink:

Oh, and the fact this is marked as complete... makes me sad. A sequel is needed!

Nice story. It does suffer some grammar issues, but a very interesting short nontheless.

All my thumbs are belong to you :moustache:

Thanks so much everypony!
I'll seriously consider 'just desserts' as the title, and I am working on a "sequel." They were going to be two independent stories but they are turning out to be related:)
:twilightsmile:

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