The first alicorn, named Brightflower,is very brave and strong. She rules the kingdom of Equestria. But when she is carried away by the evil magic within a powerful magic locket created by Discord, she is sent to the moon, where many years later, she is met by Princess Luna, Brightflower, living eternally on the moon, has no choice but to stay there in peace when Princess Luna returns to the earth. But what will happen when Princess Luna tells the Mane Six about the hopeless, stranded alicorn living on the moon?
Chapters (2)
Dat wall of text. (What really irks me here is that you managed to format it well, the ONLY thing you had to do was to put spaces...*bashes head against wall*)
Dat.....appalling...thing called an OC.....
Live-as-long-as-you-want-magic-at-birth.
B.S way of a sue preserving her Sue-ness into.....
YOU CORRUPTED THE ELEMENTS OF HARMONY YOU HERETIC!!!! (From what I can see, Six Lockets? Seriously?)
*Sobs*
Must......continue.......
You should probably add an Alternate Equestria tag.
I'm sorry, but I lost interest when I read the name Brightflower. It just doesn't seem very alicorn-y to me. I name my alicorns with Greek/Roman influences, making them have a sense of power. Galaxius, Archaeus, Centurion, Solara, Zeus, etc. Alicorns are super-powerful beings and should have appropriate names. Just a suggestion.
1178646 You're right. Brightflower sounds more like a Warriors OC.
Author, listen to this guy. He smart.
1179572 You called me smart. I like you.
1181495 Well, your comment is a valuable response and should be taken on board. You deserve it.
1178646
Tnuyum, actually, I did base the pony Brightflower on a warrior cat.
Can I use one of the names you provided?
Actually, I might delete the whole stry instead.
My other stories are better.
If you wanted to use the names, go right ahead.1187225
This story is permanently cancelled.