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Mix-up #1 · Dec 7th, 2019 · 1 · 1 · Chapter 2: Apples Spelled with a K ·

Interesting, this could actually be an interesting M/M romance with Discord. The main character seems to have a rather clear back story to him and feels more of a proper character for a romance protagonist and it is hippalectryon for a main character, I wonder what his his kinds back story, seeing what little history and mythology tells us about them it could very much be a race created by discord seeing that their always some ancient joke or derision about about them apparently. I wonder what will be the final stroke that will end his friendship with his current boy friend, and how he will actually get to pursue Discord, will it have anything to do with his job somehow? I did like the scene with Zephyr Breeze, in the chapter that really was the highlight that that made the story interesting to me, hope we will see more of him in the future.

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Char_Char #2 · Dec 8th, 2019 · · 1 · Chapter 2: Apples Spelled with a K ·

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Thank you so much! I appreciate your kind words.

I don't have plans for Zephyr appearing after this is settled (in fact, I dislike Zephyr as a whole but here we are anyway), I don't see why I couldn't change my mind later on. Haha.

Thanks for the offer. I may take you up on that at some point. ;)

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Mix-up #3 · Dec 8th, 2019 · · 1 · Chapter 3: Cold Case ·

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Well, this was a surprisingly mature break up, now I wonder how he will meet Discord again, it doesn't sound like he can go far from his job for too long? Will he lose his job or get transfer to Ponyville?

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Mix-up #4 · Dec 14th, 2019 · · 1 · Chapter 4: First Date? - Part 1 ·

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Not much actually happening in this chapter, but I wonder if this photo means that there is some time travel involved that will come up with next?

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Mix-up #5 · Dec 16th, 2019 · 1 · 1 · Chapter 5: First Date? - Part 2 ·

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Hum, interesting, I wonder if this hypnotizing will come into play more in the story later or more further manipulations like it was done Zephyr. I would be curious to know what made Discord decide to try dating him or got interested in him?

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Mix-up #6 · Dec 26th, 2019 · · 1 · Chapter 6: Chain of Events ·

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sorry for taking so much time to get to this chapter, I was very busy. As for my though of the chapter it was nice we get a few interesting insight in how he views the world and maybe ponies. still not sure why he got interested in the guy in the first place but I think we are gradually getting there. I wonder if the fact that he works at a mental ward staff and the fact that Discord is the lord of chaos and madness with play in contrast with each other? I am hopping for lots of mind fuckery. I wonder if Discord will try to pass himself as a patient just to be with him along with his other shenanigans?

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Mix-up #7 · Jan 5th, 2020 · · 1 · Chapter 7: Is This What You Call A Date?! ·

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hum, this was an interesting chapter, especially toward the end with the hypnosis part, I wonder how Discord is going to lead him to the path of madness? Looking forward to the next chapter.

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Mix-up #8 · Jan 22nd, 2020 · 1 · 1 · Chapter 8: Wouldn't It Be Funny If...? ·

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Well this was a fun read to see the guy go on a tickle rampage, it was very enjoyable, I would have loved to see more of his antics in the pegasus city. I wonder where this will lead to now.

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