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“There are three things all wise men fear: the sea in storm, a night with no moon, and the anger of a gentle man.” - Patrick Rothfuss

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Hearth's Warming is tomorrow, and Peach Fuzz has a problem.

Her Dad is feeling down, remembering her Mom. That won't do for Hearth's Warming.

So the young filly sets out at the last minute to find the perfect present not just to cheer her Dad up again, but to help keep him smiling in the days to come.


This was written for _Undefined_ as part of Jinglemas 2019! For more information about Jinglemas, check out the group!

And reviewed by leeroy_gIBZ!

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Comments ( 7 )

I love it!

I love Peach's cheerful attitude, I love seeing this story told through her eyes, I love the sad but heartwarming plot, I love Pinkie's scene with her, I love the effort you put into incorporating her disparate appearances through the series, I love the ending. And of course I love the "cameo" from Lyra and Bon Bon, too.

When I made my Jinglemas request, I felt bad about forcing somebody to pretty much invent a new character. But you knocked this out of the park. Thank you for this wonderful gift!

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I will certainly admit it was a bit of a challenge - but comments like this make it worthwhile. Happy Holidays, and I'm glad you enjoyed!

This story was adorable! Great job incorporating Peach's appearances throughout the show; reminds me of the old days of the fandom. You did a fantastic job.

Really nice and sweet story.

I feel like there aren't enough stories fleshing out random background foals, because out of all the background foals that don't really speak the only one with any real large presence is Dinky and their are so many other foal characters with amazing design and quirks that would make a great story.

I'm glad you made this.

Daww. Sweet little daddy-daughter story. :heart: Or would it be daughter-daddy since it’s told from the little filly’s perspective? Either way :heart:.

THIS WAS SO FRICKIN CUTE!!!
I love the writing!!!! Peach is so cute, and the narrative really does sound just like a little girl! It was so sweet and made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. :rainbowkiss:
Guess you could say...I'm peachy!
(Okay that was bad I know. :twilightblush:)

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