My name is Betty Jewel and I am sick and tired of being teased for being a relative of a villain pegasus by the name of Cozy Glow. In a fit of anger, I smashed Cozy Glow's statue. Now her ghost is following me around because apparently, she died in her statue and couldn't crossover for some reason like Tirek and Queen Chrysalis did. I didn't know the statue had real creatures inside until after I smashed Cozy Glow's statue.
I learned that I was something called a Death Walker. Death Walker's are someone that keeps the balance of life and death in check. I also found out in learning how to do the job of a death walker that I'm pretty good at it. As I'm learning how to be a death walker and since Cozy Glow's ghost is following me around I thought it was best to try and reform her. The funny thing is, as Cozy Glow follows me around she actually reforms herself. What my question is will Cozy Glow ever be able to crossover?
Note: Seeing that this story is getting a rewrite which is The Ghost of Cozy Glow- A Redux, I am NOT doing anymore edits on this story. Please don't make anymore edit comments on this story. You can read the story if you like but I'm not doing edits for this one because of the rewrite.
You can check out the rewrite through is this link: The Ghost of Cozy Glow- A Redux
What's the Suicide / Self Harm tag for?
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I just took the suicide self harm tag off, cause that's only in the begging. It doesn't really need now that you think about it.
what the problem with everyone knocked Betty down?
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Not everyone does to Betty does that to Betty, just Princess Twilight did it
Half pony half what now? I am not sure if I can take this fic seriously.
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What do you mean by that?
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And Betty is half human and half pegasus
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Welcome to alternate universes! Enjoy!
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Alternative_universe_(fan_fiction)#:~:text=An%20alternative%20universe%20(also%20known,the%20fanwork%20is%20based%20on.
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Nevermind I don't think it has alt universe elements I was mixed up. Its just unique.
I don't think it should be too unexpected or seem out of place. I've seen partial humans in Pandemic: Aftermath, and a lot of stories with transformations: Pandemic, Five Score Divided by Four, Chaotic Touch of Harmony being some of the bigger ones. Its not common to have a half-human half-pony situation but there are notable stories that are pretty great with these similar concepts so that reason alone won't turn me aside.
A second reason for it being not unexpected is in the show itself hybrid forms of species are a strong pattern such as: Gryphons, Hippogryphs and Centaur(Tirek). Following the strong pattern of hybrid forms in the show, one of them already being part human with Tirek even having hands, it seems to lend itself to the idea of a human pony form to me. Humans also gain confirmation in EG spinoff. So it doesn't feel that radical, just under-utilized as a concept on fimfiction.
Wait, why is Celestia in the wrong? Eternal night would mean the extinction of every living organism?
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Not exactly, but the Afterlife Court does take into consideration everything that a person did with their life. In this story sending Luna to the moon probably wasn't the only thing Celesta messed up on. But in the next chapter Luna does something very bad to Betty and gets sent to prison in the Middle Ground. But Celestia was given a position in power Managing the Middle Ground. So she wasn't really punished for it.
And the same thing happened with Luna, she was given a position of power to Manage the Middle Ground along with Celestia.
Oh, I'm working on another version of this story. I will be keeping this version up because so many people have read it already.
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Neat, out of curiosity how did this end up in the momlestia folder?
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Was it in a group? If it is then they need to take my story out of it.
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Its under the momlestia and sunset folder, unless Celestia is a mother figure to Sunset or Adoptive or Biological mom i do not see why this would be under the folder yet.
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Yeah I don't know because the story isn't about anything like that. Nowhere near close! So I have no idea why it got there. So yeah...
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I dont know how to get it off, try messaging a group admin or smth.
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If you're trying to help me out with editing, thanks but I'm in the process of doing a rewrite as a separate story. I'm not really planning on spending anymore time on trying to edit this one. Thanks so much for trying to help. Here's a link for the rewrite:
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/495735/the-ghost-of-cozy-glow-a-redux
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If you're trying to help me out with the editing, thanks but I'm not going to edit this story further because I have a rewrite in progress. Here's a link to it:
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/495735/the-ghost-of-cozy-glow-a-redux
I also have an editor for this one. But thanks so much for trying to help.
This Betty is really starting to become a brat.
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Thank you for trying to do the edits for me. But please STOP doing these comments because I'm not doing any edits to this story because of the rewrite. I have an editor for the rewrite as well. Here is a link to the rewrite:
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/495735/the-ghost-of-cozy-glow-a-redux
Again, please STOP with the edit comments. I'm NOT doing anymore editing for this story. Please and thankyou!
Shouldn't this story be marked as cancelled and not complete?
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No it's complete and STOP TELLING ME WHAT TO DO WITH MY STORIES! YOU'RE VERY CLOSE TO GETTING BLOCKED BECAUSE OF THIS! IT'S COMPLETE AND IT'S NOT CANCELED!!!!! I DECIDE WHAT TO DO WITH MY STORIES AND NOT YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!