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Cadaver21


Real Name: Cadaver Charles Sanders.

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Comment posted by David M Coleman deleted Jul 2nd, 2020

Hope this fic is well received, whenever you're ready for chapter 2 me and Failsafe are ready

First things first typos because contrary to popular belief I don't think anybody likes raping music. Second I have no idea what these characters are almost no description is given except for boob size and that's fine but you're going to need to do a little bit more than that are they human are they anthros any other descriptors. This storys MC OC...... he's fine his character just screams teenage wish fulfillment in bold letters, hell his name even screams teenage edginess...... which again is fine it's just a turn off for a lot of people.

Who's the new student?

“Welcome to Canterlot High! I’m your new Principal, you might know me as Princess Twilight Sparkle, but please call me Twilight. Now you might see some familiar faces as part of the staff, and some new ones, but please be respectful of everyone." Twilight said.

hold up! In season 9, isn't starlight headmare and not twilight? Hmmm.... :rainbowhuh:

my editor failsafe did this i am just working on the chapter

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okee. And respond to moi pm!

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Shit, your actually are right, i never thought about that. My bad.

Why is Equestria typed with all capital letters?

“Right I don’t want to hear any quacks, tweets, oinks, whinnies, or cockle-doodle-doos when I say… Dodgeball!” said Soarin as he pulled a Dodgeball from out of nowhere.

Chicken little reference classic

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You're welcome and when come next chapter ?

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