So far, my impression of this story is " Discworld's version of Princess Bride, crossed with an isekai anime, on drugs" --- I'm TOTALLY ok with that, for the record.
10162341 I don't know? probably? Truth be told, when I first started writing this it was strictly to entertain myself. I didn't really believe that anyone was actually going to read it. I'm really more suited to telling stories around a campfire than actually writing.
But I was having fun so I continued to write and the more I wrote the better I got and the better I got the more I could see how terrible I was.
Much to my surprise people were actually reading my story and some of them liked it?
I've always believed if your going to do some thing do it well so i got some books and started teaching myself how to write write better. So if you can read through the terrible second person perspective, overcomplicated plot, and awful cliches then I would honestly appreciate you criticism. And don't hold back I really wanna know what makes you go Uhhg this story is awful because... or What was the author thinking why did they write it like that?...
So far, my impression of this story is " Discworld's version of Princess Bride, crossed with an isekai anime, on drugs"
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I'm TOTALLY ok with that, for the record.
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I'm glad your enjoying the story so far, thank you for the comment!
This is getting better with each new chapter.
Is this story nothing but cliches stacked on cliches?
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I don't know? probably?
Truth be told, when I first started writing this it was strictly to entertain myself. I didn't really believe that anyone was actually going to read it. I'm really more suited to telling stories around a campfire than actually writing.
But I was having fun so I continued to write and the more I wrote the better I got and the better I got the more I could see how terrible I was.
Much to my surprise people were actually reading my story and some of them liked it?
I've always believed if your going to do some thing do it well so i got some books and started teaching myself how to
writewrite better. So if you can read through the terrible second person perspective, overcomplicated plot, and awful cliches then I would honestly appreciate you criticism. And don't hold back I really wanna know what makes you go Uhhg this story is awful because... or What was the author thinking why did they write it like that?...