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Closer-To-The-Sun


You gotta kick at the darkness until it bleeds daylight.

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“Many is a word that only leaves you guessing,/Guessing 'bout a thing you really ought to know.” –Led Zeppelin, ‘Over The Hills And Far Away’

Sequel: "New Slang"

A blue colt wakes up knowing only two things: his name and that there is a hyperactive pink mare staring right at him. Pinkie Pie finds this pony just outside of Ponyville and invites him to stay in the town. Will he ever get the answers to where he's from and who he is?


This story was commissioned by DestinyDecade on deviantArt, which his original character, and linked with the rest of his stories.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 8 )

1103709 I title all of my fics (both story name and chapter names) after music (as you could tell if you look on my main page). But to answer your question, yes and no. I does have a small hint of it, but nothing major.

Oh, I love this story. I really do. Freaking awesome. :D

"Wily? That word….it sounds so famailar…."

Familiar, eh...?

...can't imagine why. <.< >.>

By the way, should be "familiar"!

...wait a minute. That's...the end? But...nothing got resolved, here.

Protagonist is still an amnesiac with no plot relevance ever having come from that.

Vague hint of a love triangle with Pinkie and AJ, not really pursued or followed up on.

I mean, what you have here is a decent set-up, but you ended it before anything really happened, there's no conflict or explanation of anything you've set up...it's like trying to read Moby Dick only to find it ends after "Call me Ishmael"!

I enjoyed what I read so I cannot in good conscience downvote it, but I also cannot in good conscience upvote it when it feels so...incomplete.

Maybe I'm missing something, like a sequel or some such, but even if there is a sequel this just cuts off so abruptly.

It all just left me feeling kinda like this:

1116194 This was written for someone, as he asked me to set up his character and what not in Equestria. And that's what I planned to do and leave it. However, he did ask for another, which I will upload soon.

A a dark blue and white blue pony. Remembers the name Wily. Name is Robert. I wonder what this is referencing...

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