Harmony is dying. Order and chaos are out of balance. Something must be done; a sacrifice must be made.
Fluttershy knows this, but she does not accept it.
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THAT IS BRILLIANT IDEA!!!!
I also think fluttershy has close connect with nature, which could be a reason for fluttershy to be immortal!
It will be a so perfect if fluttercord could live together forever
THIS. WAS. GREAT!
10/10 would read again. Also, the Megan thing? Brilliant. If you ever have another story idea for this particular universe, I‘d 100% read it.
Seriously: amazing idea, amazing execution. I loved it!
My favorite part was the last bit of dialogue between Megan and Fluttershy, after the “Wait!”. Tugged my heartstrings!!!!
Story aside, I love that your cover art is from Neil Breen‘s Twisted Pair.
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Sorry, I'm not really sure what that is. This is some image I found off of Pinterest that had a Shutterstock source ✊😔
🌟✨🌟THIS WAS SO GOOD!!!!
Please make more!!
This was beautiful...............Fluttercord forever. I love this.
Wow, this was such a nice way to touch up on the whole "Fluttershy being mortal" thing without that actually being the crux of the story. Making her connected to the forest when she's already close to it and the nature and animals within the forest makes so much sense. It feels like an appropriate way for her to ascend, as opposed to just making her a princess or something. Lady of the Everfree is a great title for Fluttershy.
And just curious, the plot of Harmony dying and Discord ascending to save harmony itself, was that at all inspired by one of the old drafts of the show's final season? I believe it was something like that, but I'm not completely sure. If it was, that was a wonderful touch to make a conflict of this story, while still offering a happy ending.
Also, that cameo with Megan. Great stuff! Great story and writing overall.
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I was afraid this thing was too headcanon lore-heavy, but I'm glad it works well.
Thanks so much
And yes, it totally WAS inspired by that leaked draft! I completely forgot to mention it when I published this. I'll go back and edit it into the notes! I thought that was such an interesting concept, and I wanted to do my own twist on it. I'm glad you noticed!
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I'll probably just keep the human tag, since the only non-human things they have are horns and wings (and Discord's gonna have weird anatomy even if he's 100% human). I don't think that's non-human enough to count as anthro, but that's just me.
I really enjoyed this story, I don't suppose there's a sequel in the works?
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Not at the moment, but nothing's ever completely out of the cards. I'm just working full time now, and my motivation is all over the place, but I never rule out the possibility of writing more in a particular universe. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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Cool, I asked mainly because I have this in my absolute favorites list and I've come back and read it at least three times now. it would be interesting to see how Celestia, Luna, and even Twilight react to finding out Fluttershy is now semi-immortal and her life force is tied to the Everfree forest.
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It's so flattering to hear you've reread it!! I do that with several other fics, so it's always really nice hearing that other people do it with mine.
It would be an interesting topic to explore! Also, plenty of opportunities for Discord to make jokes about how random trees in the forest are his wife.
This story is awesome as it is, but then MEGAN?!?!?! AS someone who grew up with the original Ponies, I LOVE IT!! That was out of nowhere BRILLIANT!!
And don't be ashamed of writing the characters in human form. I do for all the FimFics I have planned. It's just easier in some respects.