A simple fan who is trying his best! Fair warning my stories tend to focus on everypony's favorite dragon!
When Spike comes back from Royal Business he finds the castle attacked and his friends missing. With some help from a special Doctor and Mailmare, he'll take back his home and go through the many ghosts that have taken over his home to get back his friends.
Obviously a Luigi's Mansion like story in honor of the third game being released and Halloween just passing.
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A few errors but nothing major. This seemed...rushed, like the pace could have been slowed down. I was half expecting Peewee to appear to help his owner but either way you have my attention.
Hmm you're right and i plan to take much more time with the characters in the future chapters with this I was trying to make something short but didn't come off right. Ahh you have the same ideas as me my friend hehe
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Well don't ever rush a story even if it's a one shot take your time and craft it out.
I love how snarky Peewee is. It's great to see him in this. A lot of people forget about him and the other pets even me sometime. But it's great you did not. I'm not surprised Sombra is behind this but it does have my attention. Great job even if it's a bit hard to read your work sometime.
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Yeah I thought Peewee taking on Spike's sarcasm and snark would be funny. Yeah I know that Luigi had a dog in the second game so I wanted Spike to have his pet but wondered why he'd be there so I added Discord being Spike's shopkeeper. Sorry about the reading hard thing I'm looking into a proofreader like you said.
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I could see it. You did great and Discord being shopkeeper is humorous. I'm excited for more. Don't give up. You'll find it soon. Maybe look for a group for editors or proofreaders. I should have some on my profile.
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Really? I'll check it out then! Sorry I haven't been able to send over those ideas yet, been busy with family
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Yep and you're perfectly fine my friend. Did you find my Discord?
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yep I thought I sent the request
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I got it.
When Discord pulled out a cloak and went "Hello stranger, what are you buying?", it certainly reminded me of the Merchant from Resident Evil 4.
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Yep! Game references I love them
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What other games do you know? :0
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I have a drawer full right now but I've had games for all systems. You can name some and I'll tell you what I know.
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Such as Devil May Cry? :0
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I played 1 through 4 and DMC I still need 5. Oh forgot to say I saw the anime too. I liked it.
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I managed to have all 5(6 counting the.. so-called reboot) for Xbox One.
Which one is your fav?
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three is my favorite but I played two the most.
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I remember playing 3 the most since it was the only DMC game I have(for the PS2) before I got the games on the Xbox One when going to get DMC5.
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I didn't have a memory card when I played dmc 2 so I had to keep restarting it.
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I remember how often I had trouble with the memory card back then.
Specifically how I kept running out of space and forced to delete some data or end up not being able to save game data.