A bunch of High Schoolers suddenly find themselves getting exposed to Equestrian magic. Though practically anyone would be delighted, its a bit inconvenient when you keep turning into a pony in the middle of third period.
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Well expectations are met for this here chapter, at the very least!
Really appreciated how atmospheric Angela's part was (if you'll pardon the pun). Jake finds a silver lining to the dark clouds of their life, and it'll be interesting to see how they go from there, now that we know a little more about their precarious situation. And Arty's difficult experience with his cutie mark opens up a potentially very interesting discussion on free will and destiny; he'd certainly have a very different perspective on this than ponies of Equestrian culture.
All in all a quite pleasant chapter, though I think the form would benefit from a slight polish so it doesn't detract from the engaging tale.
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I do need to work a bit on the overall grammar. Glad you enjoyed Angela’s part and her experience. Watching the show I kind of got a subtle feeling that perhaps cutie marks are a bit more insidious than were let on.
Thanks again for reading and the early review!
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Happy to help
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Oh well, I'll have to wait and see
#relatable
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It's quite a feeling, and I felt a bit corny writing it, but for those that have had that kind of moment that's just kind of how it really feels.