A bunch of High Schoolers suddenly find themselves getting exposed to Equestrian magic. Though practically anyone would be delighted, its a bit inconvenient when you keep turning into a pony in the middle of third period.
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Action ramps up, as some of our various narrators cross paths!
Still love what you're doing with bat ponies, their powers and their culture. It was really interesting to see how it impacted Mike's actions, both in combat and outside, as well as the different views of his parents.
And as for this last revelation... The implications are fascinating!
Good chapter! Also Angela needs to lay off Artemis, of course he is having a hard time with his body. It is a huge dissonance to become something you dont want to be. And it is getting increasingly harder for him to not be a female pony like his body wants to be. I am so glad mike's mother talked some sense into his dad cause that was about to go south real quick.
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It really is, its not like he could warm up to the idea just overnight either. That much of a radical shift of life perspective isn't easy to cope with. Angie is just jealous as can be that not only is he getting all the transformations, but that he isn't doing anything with it. Being dead and able to only observe for a couple decades will get you quite the perspective.
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Just a little action here and there...certainly more to come later on. I'm quite happy with the bat pony lore side. It was a bit inspired by The Shadow Hunters (for the use of runes), this chapter was also intended to highlight a little of the dangers of their magic that his father had ignored up until now.
Hope the explanation will be worth the wait when I get the next chapter out!
And the pieces are falling into place...
The chapter really steps up a notch from previous ones. The bat culture and their abilities as you interpret them are all fascinating and very interesting as always and their seemingly bitter rivalry against changelings (according to Eclipse, but that's just his perspective after all.) Bat ponies have been my fascination and I love to hear others thoughts and headcanons on it.
Combat was rather exciting too, even if short but I wouldn't of course want an entire chapter dedicate on fighting. For Mike, it would be difficult to take a life, then again he was in danger of being killed by one. What will guarantee that he won't take one in the future? Looks like he will establish some truth in the matter whether changelings can truly change.
And a cliffhanger! Grr, you know how much it begs me to want a next chapter as soon as possible!
All in all, a fun read and looking forward for more! A moment of respite for our heroes.. For now.
Visual misinterpretation i9s my theory here. Mike just doesn't know what he's seeing.
You know what a theory is, right? A guess that went to college! nyuks
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Hehehe, that’s a good one. Sadly...the truth may not be.