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Jordanwolfboy


Just a brony looking for good stories. And maybe write a few stories here and there.

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This story is a sequel to The Party Girl That Needs Your Love


Rarity has always been one to see all the details in her line of work. She's supposed to, since she works in the fashion industry. She's always been able to make sure that her work is almost perfect; except for one day where she makes one crucial flaw in one of her creations. As a result, Rarity begins to doubt herself and begins messing up on each and every new dress or piece of clothing that she makes. This leads to her fearing that her days of being a fashionista are over and done with. This is where you came in, to help her gain back her confidence and to not let the fear of failure get to her. And as you begin to help her, she starts to feel something for you that she hadn't before.


Cover image by https://www.deviantart.com/the-butcher-x

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 16 )

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I actually don’t know when, I’m really sorry that it’s taking a while it’s just that lately I haven’t had the interest to write and I’ve been really busy with a bunch of other things. I’ll try to get the next chapter out as soon as I can it’s just taking some time.

Im really excited for this one, there aren’t alot of good Rarity x Anon/OC romance ones i know of that aren’t rated Mature.

Our lovely Marshmallow needs more love

And this is a good start too, well done darling :raritywink:

Rarity: “Would you like to see my new collection Anon darling?”

Anon: “ah ah! No spoilers Rarity.”

Rarity: “but darling I think you would enjoy...”

Anon: “NO SPOILERS!!!!!!!”

Ok, time for you to update this. :raritywink::raritywink::raritywink:

Poor Rare:raritycry::raritydespair:

On the other hand: Yay new chapter!!!! WOOT WOOT!

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Yeah, sorry it took so long, I’ve just been very busy with other things and the fact that writers block is a pain to get rid of. So hopefully, it was worth the wait. :pinkiehappy:

I cant wait for it to be complete

Need some help writing the next chapter?

I really like Rarity and this looks like a very impressive story so far. :raritystarry::raritystarry::raritystarry:

The show went on for a few more minutes before you noticed something strange happening. A piece from one of the dresses was starting to come loose as the thread that was holding it together started falling out. This continued until the dress had completely fallen apart leaving the model completely stripped of clothing aside from her underwear. The crowd gasped as the model finally noticed before hastily covering herself. You, Rarity, and the girls stared at the screen completely jaw-dropped by what just happened. It honestly took you a moment to fully comprehend the scene that played in front of you. One of Rarity's dresses had completely fallen apart... on stage... in front of thousands of people! You couldn't even imagine what Rarity was going through right now.

This would probably make me a terrible friend, but I would have laughed so hard.

"The Story That Needs an Update" aka THIS ONE!!! :raritywink::raritywink::raritywink:

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