Brand New Games: The OTHER Game

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nfreak

nfreak #1 · Oct 12th, 2019 · 1 · ·

OMG I can't tell you how excited I am to see this pop up on my feed. I can't wait to give it a read :D

Lanxide

Lanxide #2 · Oct 12th, 2019 · 6 · ·

I didn't expect you to cross over into m/m territory. I'm definitely giving this one a read.

Fox spirit

Fox spirit #3 · Oct 12th, 2019 · 1 · ·

OH FUCK!

Aegis Heart

Aegis Heart #4 · Oct 13th, 2019 · 5 · ·

Love your writing. And this one especially was done very well. Hope to read more. ^~^

NightStalker

NightStalker #5 · Oct 13th, 2019 · · ·

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I giggled when I wrote that

Lanxide

Lanxide #6 · Oct 13th, 2019 · 7 · ·

Aw I was hoping Spike was going to get a turn too

Unit

Unit #7 · Oct 15th, 2019 · · ·

Despite all the foalcon and the name Pound Cake not being so subtle anymore, its really neatly writtten story. Good job lad.

TheMindsEyeOfMitchinator

TheMindsEyeOfMitchinator #8 · Oct 16th, 2019 · 7 · ·

Really good job on this series. I read them all in the span of 5 days and loved every single one. I was thinking, though, for the next one (if there is a next one), you could have Spike have a sort of existential crisis, where he starts to think that maybe he isn't as straight as he once thought he was. You already have the premise set up (if that wasn't the plan already). It doesn't even have to be the main plot of the story. It could just be a single scene in the beginning of the chapter, where Spike can't stop thinking about that night, or where he has a dream that he is pounding Rarity, but then she suddenly turns into Pound Cake and he wakes up when he cums. Hard. Before transitioning to the main plot. I think that would be a cool storyline.

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