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Lunatic God


I may stand there with 22 ping, but know that my widowmaker is reloading shells, I'm listening to voice chat as if I'm not lagging, and I'm watching my ping get higher than the age of the universe

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So, seventeen creatures, I recognize as humans appeared in the Everfree. From what I can understand, they soon ordered four to head off into the forest and gather wood, stone, and components. After a day of planning between four who stayed behind - who I will call the Clan Leaders - the four returned with literal metric tons of wood and stone, but no components.
They soon begin construction of what we now call the Ever Free Fortress, building a wall of stone topped with barbed wire to enclose the clearing for their own use, the only entrance and exit being the one gate pointed towards the end of a dirt path off the main road. 
After the placement of a border, the four leaders began construction of the main base, seemingly using magic infused blueprints that would construct what they called a twig base, which would be upgraded to stronger materials after the lower level frame of the building was placed and they needed to continue upward. 
They built a large base, topped with a cube-like rectangular floor, which seemed to be only for lookout.
As the leaders placed beds, furni, and storage areas inside the base, the eleven others began work in the courtyard, strangely planting small gardens of hemp plants, placing a few large furni close to the base, and lighting up the outside with campfires. 
This is where my writing ends, as I go and take the risk of a lifetime. 

Crossover with Rust, owned by Facepunch

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 15 )

Alright, you have my attention, Continue.

RUST STORY DO FUCKING MORE KNOW !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Whaddya wanna see next? Because after the confrontation, I have no idea how to continue this.

RUST all gamers are now in rust and there on the war path!!!


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other games wepins will shou up



sorry for Bad grammer

O'k I'll bite, this shows its self to be quite intriguing, I wonder how they'll react to the mane 6.

On a side note I hope that human curiosity takes the upper hand next chapter, as while their objective is to survive, one can't rightly do that if they don't know all the factor's involved for insurance reasons.

Not only that but taking in the current rust updates (Even tho I don't play it yet, I've watched Brit, Shadowfax, PrinceVidz and ect;.), they could become good citizens of Equestria, and or the land they now claim as their's becoming a principality under it. And considering that hint that you've giving us that this is somewhere before season 9, and could be before season 4, I see alot that can be done... But I can't say if it will be all for good or not, as is your story.

I'v seen a few Gmod crossovers here, but this is the first that I've noticed a Rust one, I hope it will go far and be a decent read for all. So far this chapter shows it can be a decent read, I hope I'm not wrong for the future chapters.

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It is definitely before season 9, yes. Big mare princess Twilight doesn't fit in my plans whatsoever.

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Good to know, do you have an ETA for the next chapter, or do/would you like a little help world building ta get past some writers block?

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Actually, in fact, your comment gave me a starting point, and so far, everything's going smoothly, so I shouldn't need help! And give me about a week or so, if I don't forget (I probably will).

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Very good, I was hoping it would!~
I'll see about leaving comments to inspire you each update.

Can you please continue?:fluttershysad:
I also left a like...

You actually continued.:pinkiehappy: Squeeee!

OK, to give a serious review:
Overall it’s a short, but intense chapter. I personally didn’t find any grammatical errors. (And i suck at editing, so don’t take my word.) The meating between Twilight and the unknown player was solid, although it’s a bit disappointing to not get to know his name. Overall it leaves a lot of open questions like who he thought Twilight actually was, or why he knew her name. It’s not a bad thing since it keeps the reader reading and to many answers make a story boring.
Grade::moustache::moustache::moustache:⬜⬜

Final note: I hope that tsunami of inspiration arrives soon.:yay:

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Welyn

With a side of porgie

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