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DarkJester


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you just had to do this?

why don't you go and do so with all the mane 6. oh and don't forget Luna and Celestia. in fact, let Pinkie consume the whole damn Equestria.

"Fluttershy lost all control of her bladder then."
:rainbowlaugh:
Oh god, this is so bad, but hilariously so. This gets a generous 1 star from me.

well, at least it doesn't end badly. thanks for finishing this for me. never again another cupcakes -related story. never again.

Aw... sad...

All the gore of Cupcakes with none of the "originality?"
No mercy on the voting front.

:unsuresweetie:This site was 'Cupcakes-free' for all of two weeks... Way to break the streak guy.

#9 · Dec 15th, 2011 · · ·

Oh look, it's this again.

Anyone who tries to cash in on the brief fame of an overrated troll fic doesn't deserve to call themselves a writer. :trixieshiftleft:

I don't know why this was rated so bad, .5? Only an absolute piece of shit should have that rating. Sure it was gruesome and disturbing, the people viewing this obviously didn't read the description. If your heart is weak and you can't stand something like this, Don't read it. Anyway I found it suspenseful, well written to keep it from getting boring, its nice to read something different. I gave you 5 stars in an attempt to counter the bullshit .5 rating.

69099

You don't seem to understand.

I am a huge fan of grimdark. Really, it's my favorite tag. A well done grimdark story is incredible, it makes for profound character and world building. To name a few, Fallout: Equestria, Backwards Through the Looking Glass, Silent Ponyville, and others.

Cupcakes was a terrible story. It wasn't the content that made it bad, it was the utter lack of spirit. There was no plot, absolutely none. It was just mindless killing. No substance. But for whatever reason, it generated a huge fuckton of terrible spinoffs, like this one. and just like the original, this story has no substance and is just another cheap knockoff. So yes, I rated it .5 because the author couldn't be bothered to write something original.

69104
Seems though I have, I probably didn't notice because I was looking for a quick read to keep me entertained. Now that you mention, it seems what you are saying is correct, however I have not read any other stories like this to base it off of.

69104

returned to check the comments this fic's causing (it's cupcakes related, so there's always shitstorm) :derpytongue2:

anyways, this is all true. cupcakes ain't nothing but slaughter, but it was meant to be like so.
anyways, i'm not defending cupcakes, it deserves all the crap you can drop on it.

Thank you to those who actually bothered to read the story and rate it honestly (whether it be positive or otherwise). I appreciate it!

greatest shit ever

worthy goddamn sequel to cupcakes


Oh, and disregard all those emotional fags that are about to storm in your history. They'll probably go "omg!! y u kill peenkee paii!!" or maybe "omg!! whay u do dis 2 floote-shaay!".

Either way, this is awesome. 5/5

69358

At the very least, your writing style is good. I was only brutal with the rating because my patience with these things has run out. You do yourself an injustice trying to ride Cupcakes' gravy train, to the point that I'm almost offended that you'd waste your talent like this.

69410

I liked cupcakes. Or rather, I like the concept behind it, as the story itself was rather subpar.

This idea did not come to me after reading cupcakes however. It came to me from a certain post on a certain tumblr (see: http://askpinkaminadianepie.tumblr.com/post/9382370603) I liked it so much that I wanted to bring the idea to life.

i liked this story honestly. and the revival of both pinkie pie and rainbow dash kinda repaired what harm the 1st cupcakes did.

i liked this only for the happy ending Enough said :moustache:

93204
Sort of. She's more like her tutor and teacher than actual parent.

i love pinky and realize that she could possible be suffering from multipul personality disorder. still that thing at the end with young pinky and the cupcake was sad:applecry:

I really liked it but... why are Rainbow and Pinkie fillys again????



And what about Angel???

103503
I hoped I had made this obvious enough. Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie were resurrected, but as fillies. A "fresh start" so to speak.

Angel is dead, thus the box above Fluttershy's mantlepiece.

Are you asking why he wasn't revived? Angel isn't an element of harmony, which was a requirement for the resurrection spell.

when i read this i bet i was the only one to yell at my computer "NO TWILIGHT! MOTHERBUCKIN FLUTTERSHY CANT BE THE SAME BECAUSE COCKADOOLIE PINKIE WAS GONNA TURN HER INTO BUCKIN CUPCAKES!" :flutterrage: :pinkiecrazy: though i feel bad for filly pinkie at the end

69358 I bet most if not all the bad ratings are because they didn't read the fic:ajbemused: but this was well written I just like cupcake related fanfics and this seemed very good but I know that if someone tried to give me some thing that struck deep fear and hatred I'd hit them too:flutterrage: just push by all the hate and remember, you can write a fanfic that's actually good if I tried it would be crap you have a talent and don't forget that.:yay:

109649
Thanks for the kind words, and don't worry, I'm not concerned about all the haters. I knew what I was getting into when I wrote this.

it was a good reading but very twisted and sick:pinkiehappy:

aw the mane six aint dead?... pinkie could do so much more anny change that you make some goresome ficks that makes the vilage ponievile looks like a ghost city? would love to read more... or even help at making that hehehe...

I was soooooo thinking filly Pinkie was gonna go cupcakes again :pinkiecrazy:

Wahh wahh theres gore wahh wahh I just read a grimdark and now I am going to threaten to kill you wahh wahh wahh

As a huge fan of B movie horror films, I personally enjoyed Cupcakes, This was a great worthy sequel. AND TRAUMATIC HAPPY!! YOU GOTTA LOVE TRAUMATIC HAPPY!!!

OMG!
The only reason I clicked on this was because of the description:
"Will she make it out alive, or will she end up sharing the same fate as Rainbow Dash?"
Sounds exactly like my description:
Will she make it out alive, or will she share the same fate as everypony else who has dared to enter Pinkies basement.
Anyway, good story (Cupcakes is a fic I just can't live without)

I saw this on fanfiction.net and favorited it. I shall do the same here! :yay: :heart: :pinkiecrazy:
(I'm Toastface BTW)

Fluttershy isawsome,but Twilight fics are more of my cup of tea.

.69025Hey apearently we have the same profile Picture!:twilightsmile:

i don't even like fluttershy. but i remember this story being mentioned somewhere as the one where Dash and Pinkie turn into kids again and have their memories wiped from the whole damned incident. even if i don't like fluttershy i would have liked her memory and everyone elses memory to be erased too.:scootangel:

Oo! Make a cupcake outta me! My name is Void! I have bland and tasteless meat!

THIS WAS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! My favorite part is when fluttershy peed. :pinkiehappy:

This is me when I imagine a pinkie pie filly: :duck:
My (imagened) pinkie pie filly face: :pinkiecrazy:

Pain three days grace
That's all I have to say question mark

Awesome job. I loved it, and that ending was a nice surprise after what happened in that basement. I read your other story (A Rocket to Insanity), and it was superb. :raritywink: You turned a commission investigation from something disgusting at first, to a nice time of reading! Thanks :pinkiehappy:
I look forward to read your other fics!

5647932

Thanks a lot. :>

Daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaammmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn that was innnnnnffffffuuuuuuucccccckkkkkiiiiinnnnggggttttteeeeennnnsssseee good ducking 5 star job

My hope is that the mane six can teach the new pinkie not to do cupcakes, but I'm scared pinkie will be angry about Fluttershy and feel neglected

I'm probably the only one that felt bad for pinkie when she was killed.

I have no words. This is just.......wow

MJP

You are fucking disgusting and completely misunderstand that scene from part of one she's not a murderer or psycho


If anything murduring her friends is the las thing she wants to do since she is so dependent in association with others

Why the hell brought they back Pinkie Pie too? She was a monster..a killer...
They should bring only Rainbow Dash back to life!! :(
And poor fluttershy... :(
But I love the story!

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