Auntie Pinkie Pie is watching us this week. My head hurts.
Thank you to my pre-reader, Annie_8472, and to everyone in FimFiction's Discord server who gave me advice on this story—too numerous to mention individually.
I'm a practising Seventh-Day Adventist Christian trying to improve his stroy writing and drawing skills.
Auntie Pinkie Pie is watching us this week. My head hurts.
Thank you to my pre-reader, Annie_8472, and to everyone in FimFiction's Discord server who gave me advice on this story—too numerous to mention individually.
A delightful small story, nice job!
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Thanks.
Aww.. this is beautiful! Such a simple subject.. but so meaningful here! Nice, nice work.
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Thanks. This was partially written off personal experience.
Nice little slice of life story. My only thing is that Pound Cake's narrative voice doesn't really fit that of an 8 year old.
Nice, very nice. Would have liked more, but it's good.
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Glad you liked it. I was going for vocabulary selection more than critical thinking and grammar.
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This was written as a little practice story while I was working on A Tale of Two Worlds chapter 6.