• Published 21st Sep 2019
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The Grimdark 6 Vol Two: Broken Beast - SuperSaiyanDiclonius



After helping tend to the destruction of Ponyville, Fluttershy goes to feed the animals in her Sanctuary...only to find a new arrival unlike anything she's seen before.

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What this dark fantasy novel is about?

Chrissy won’t just buy into a cult she would make a cult just to fuck with the other cults

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I won't go into too much details, but the main plot is three monsters who lost their homes and families to Adventurers looking for loot.

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The Wyches are the ones looking for a new Cult, Chrysalis is going to be thrown in a gladiatorial arena so these Wyches can earn their way into a new Cult.

At least...that's the plan.

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Again Chrissy is gonna screw with them and probably make side deals to get her own freedom (in my head at least lol) but who knows ideas change all the time but it would be hilarious for a cult to have its ass kicked both from a failed attack and then a captured slave humiliating them

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Oh I know it’s gonna be goood

Is the Pillar of Equestria gonna show up next volume? Or are they already did and I just forgot?

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Flash Magnus had a brief appearance. Aries compared his name to a certain Primarch's.

Don’t forget to give a heads up when the next ones ready to go I don’t wanna miss it

Things took a turn I was not expecting, but that is what makes things entertaining. For the future installments I hope that you remember that grim dark is gritty but still has some semblance of hope, otherwise it becomes Dark-Dark. Try not to fall into the trope of killing off every side character just to show how grim things are. Nameless grunts fill the ranks for a reason, to add the grim into the dark. When characters whose name we were bothered to learn die, give them their moment of glory like One-Way Express or Bumblebee. When they went, I was sad but they had meaning.

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With that out of the way, I enjoyed it. Almost forgot to thank ya for the enjoyable story! Now, I wonder what you have in store for the next installment. With that ending I can see this...

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wait, not that.. maybe also that, but this...

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Your foresight is on point, but not until the climax of Vol.4.

And yes, I remember well that even cannon fodder has its purpose.

Also, if any of you weren't aware, I've been making amateur hour YouTube videos for this fic. You'll notice a quality jump as I upgraded my video app and got better at using it. Let me know what you think and how I could improve.

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Yeah, I always found that kinda stupid. Three Chaos Gods born during known historical periods because of shit humanity did vs Slaanesh who required a galactic snuff orgy to manifest.

My headcanon is that Tzeentch was born with the Big Bang, Nurgle was born with the first ecosystem, and Khorne was born at the climax of the War in Heaven.

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There were more minor gods also authors joke of one-that-does-not-exist (due-copyright-issues) Malice\Malus. If you know old warhammer, it had more chaos gods... they were lost due IP :pinkiecrazy:

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Sometimes, vulgar language is the only appropriate description for what you're seeing.

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